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could I PM you my copy?

by 0oo0
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I wrote my first sales page but I'm looking for a critique but I don't want to just post it here.

So I was wondering if I could PM it to you for a critique?
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  • Profile picture of the author Andrew Gould
    As I replied to someone with a similar request last month:

    Just post the link.

    The price of your free critique is that others get to learn as well.

    If you really don't want to go public, pay for a private critique.
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  • Profile picture of the author 0oo0
    It's still in a word doc. I'll have to put it somewhere.
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    • Profile picture of the author Alex Cohen
      One thing to keep in mind - you may pay a steep price by publicly posting a sales letter here for critique.

      If you have a compelling offer, your competition might catch wind of it before you go live and use it themselves.

      Something to think about.

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  • Profile picture of the author Steve The Copywriter
    Also you do have to be brave to post it.

    Many don't hold back their punches - which is good - but can be a bit tough.

    For goodness sake check you copy with this list BEFORE you post it -

    http://www.warriorforum.com/copywrit...-critique.html

    It will significantly improve it, clear up any obvious "mistakes" and save you a lot of grief.

    Good luck,


    Steve
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  • Profile picture of the author Mark Andrews
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    Originally Posted by 0oo0 View Post

    could I PM you my copy?...

    I wrote my first sales page but I'm looking for a critique but I don't want to just post it here.

    So I was wondering if I could PM it to you for a critique?
    No.

    First you ask for a private free critique and then start criticizing the copywriters here for their attitude on the other thread...

    http://www.warriorforum.com/copywrit...ques-copy.html

    So, no, get lost, I'm not interested in helping you free of charge full stop.

    What do you think I am / we are? Stupid or sommit?

    You're taking the mick mate.


    Mark Andrews
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