I have wrote a script for a presentation video, but need as much feedback as possible.
Just for a feedback of a script i will send you instantly 3$ in paypal.
Grammar, Spelling (because im not native), Smoothness and Style, your personal opinion
Here you can find the script. : http://6tit.com/script.txt
Just comment with your feedback and dont forget to add your PayPal E-Mail.
(If the feedback is better than usual, I am also willing to spend more then 3$ depending on it.)
PS: maximal please only about 50 feedbacks, I think that would be enough.