Help with Proposal Please
I am trying to redo Our companies Price quote proposal because it was so bland and boring I have started on the first Part of It and was hoping someone could tell me if I am on the right track or make suggestions of things to change. It would greatly be appreciated. Thank you for your time. See Below:
Jeff;
Thank you very much for allowing the Lucid Analytics Team to assist you in the beginning stages of building KBI's Business Analytics Framework. Each stage of the Framework is vitally important, starting with Data Integration, and then Analytics, moving to Reporting, and finally Business Solutions. With every business decision there is a process, this is no different, you must begin with the proper foundation, and what you have chosen to own in the SAS Visual EBI Suite and the Lucid Analytics Swift Start Service provides the correct foundation for the framework and making more fact based decisions in your business rather than making gut based decisions. The Lucid Analytics team of Implementation specialist and Technology engineers are committed to the entire process of the Business Analytics Framework and achieving the goals that KBI has which will ultimately improve KBI's profitability. Below you will find the Quote for the solutions that we discussed. If there are any questions please feel free to contact me anytime.
Jeff;
Thank you very much for allowing the Lucid Analytics Team to assist you in the beginning stages of building KBI's Business Analytics Framework. Each stage of the Framework is vitally important, starting with Data Integration, and then Analytics, moving to Reporting, and finally Business Solutions. With every business decision there is a process, this is no different, you must begin with the proper foundation, and what you have chosen to own in the SAS Visual EBI Suite and the Lucid Analytics Swift Start Service provides the correct foundation for the framework and making more fact based decisions in your business rather than making gut based decisions. The Lucid Analytics team of Implementation specialist and Technology engineers are committed to the entire process of the Business Analytics Framework and achieving the goals that KBI has which will ultimately improve KBI's profitability. Below you will find the Quote for the solutions that we discussed. If there are any questions please feel free to contact me anytime.