
What's Wrong With My Squeeze Page?
Now I'm starting to wonder if there's something about the copy itself that might be putting people off, so I wanted to get your opinion on it. It's a traffic related offer, and the headline reads "Would You Like To Discover 5 Proven Traffic Magnets That Will Pull Visitors To Your Site?"
I thought it was a good headline before, but now I'm thinking I need to change it to something more like "Would You Like To Discover 5 Sources of Unlimited, Quality Traffic?"
I also realized I forgot to add a photo of myself, so that will help. But I'm just wondering there's anything glaringly wrong here.
Anyways, what do you all think? Thanks for any help.
Introducing Simple Subject Line Secrets...
A simple 7 minute trick Bond Halbert reveals on video--Use this to write headlines and email subject lines that force people to open your emails. So simple anyone can do this. http://awesome.chilesadvertising.com...ctlinesecrets/
âJudge your success by what you had to give up in order to get it.â
― Dalai Lama XIV
"Perfection isn't important. Improvement is."