Finally Got There WF.. Thanks So Much.

by SurrealPSD

Posted: 10 years ago 22 replies

COPY WRITING

This was the most difficult thing I have ever done, but Im very happy now that my product is live and ready to sell. With enough grit, anything can be achieved. Im hoping this may inspire other noobies to get things done.

Everything that I have done here, I have learnt from the free content in WF. The Search Bar is king. I have bought one Clickbank product that cost around $16 (Russ Ruffino's Money Tree Method), and didn't feel the need to buy anything else. Just a disclaimer; I am not an affiliate of Russ' product, or anyone elses for that matter.

This is my first foray into product creation, and Im proud to say that there is not ONE LIE on the Sales Page, and that every testimonial is genuine. No Fiverr seller came within 500 yards of this production lol..

As a noob to writing copy, I will happily accept any feedback or criticisms regarding the Sales Page.

My product:

Art System Photoshop - Video Training for Digital Artists

Tools Used:

Wordpress (OptimizePress Theme)
Membership Script (Digital Access Pass)
Cover Actions (PSDCovers.com)

All graphics created by me, with the exception of student artwork.

Cheers!

EDIT: The sales page is converting. First 24 hours, nearly $1000USD in sales - no paid traffic.

#finally

TeamBringIt 10 years ago

Congrats, on creating your...first product. Wish you, many sales!
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writeaway 10 years ago

Congrats on your first product and I wish you the greatest success!
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jideofor 10 years ago

Brilliant,Buddy...

I love the flow and wishing you good luck...

There is a place you wrote Im instead of I'm.

Pictures speak a thousand words...
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conqueror 10 years ago

Those are amazing pictures!

I believe one picture can convey hundreds of words.
Keep on doing well. Best of luck to you
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- RogerAkau 10 years ago
  
  Right on! Keep the momentum rolling.
  
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TimothyTorrents 10 years ago

Congratulations! Keep up the good work. The artwork is incredible. Have you considered selling your images?
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- SurrealPSD 10 years ago
  
  Thankyou. Im a commercial artist by trade, so I usually work on a commission basis - book covers mainly
  
  Originally Posted by timbonitus
  
  Congratulations! Keep up the good work. The artwork is incredible. Have you considered selling your images?
  
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James Fame 10 years ago

Originally Posted by SurrealPSD

As a noob to writing copy, I will happily accept any feedback or criticisms regarding the Sales Page.

Great work.

Looks like there was a lot of effort in the salesletter. I suggest you post for help in the Copywriting forum or hire a copywriter trained in the niche to help you with it.

I think you managed to build a lot of believability with visual proof in the front copy, it looks pretty decent for a "noob" attempt.

There are still a few perks, but since I do not know your traffic demographic/market that well, I am unable to comment appropriately.

"Master the Art of Photo Manipulation" sounds like a benefit-oriented headline. Are there similar products easily accessible to the prospect? If so, you might need to work on increasing the perceived difference.

How is the page converting so far? Try split-testing headlines, video salesletters and page designs.
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Larry Leggett 10 years ago

Congratulation on your first product launch. Your sales page looks really great and some amazing photos presented there which will attract the viewers.
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HansDavid 10 years ago

Hey man, awesome product. Do you have any affiliate program running? I have a wallpaper site that could promote something like this.
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- substance 10 years ago
  
  Wow, This is a great product. I agree with the others that it may help you to have a professional copy writing service on here.
  
  I have sold some photography products as an affiliate which was selling like hot cakes and pictures do speak a thousand words.
  
  More pictures, more sales. Good Luck!
  
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SurrealPSD

10 years ago

First off, thankyou everyone for the kind words and encouragement. In response to Hans, yes I do have an affiliate scheme in place - $40USD commission per sale. If anyone is in the niche, and would like to JV, please drop me a PM.

Hi James, appreciate your questions. The product is totally brand new, I haven't thrown any serious traffic at the page yet to split test the elements. As you well know, there are a million and one Photoshop packages out there, but as far as I know, my product is the only one to place a big emphasis on the 'art theory'. It's also unique in the fact that it tackles individual skills, instead of doing a load of random 'how-to's.

Originally Posted by James Fame

Great work.

Looks like there was a lot of effort in the salesletter. I suggest you post for help in the Copywriting forum or hire a copywriter trained in the niche to help you with it.

I think you managed to build a lot of believability with visual proof in the front copy, it looks pretty decent for a "noob" attempt.

There are still a few perks, but since I do not know your traffic demographic/market that well, I am unable to comment appropriately.

"Master the Art of Photo Manipulation" sounds like a benefit-oriented headline. Are there similar products easily accessible to the prospect? If so, you might need to work on increasing the perceived difference.

How is the page converting so far? Try split-testing headlines, video salesletters and page designs.

Thanks
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James Fame

10 years ago

Originally Posted by SurrealPSD

my product is the only one to place a big emphasis on the 'art theory'. It's also unique in the fact that it tackles individual skills, instead of doing a load of random 'how-to's.

Well, if your market research shows that it's a lacking product, and it's in demand, why not split-test this as a selling position? (Again, I disclaim that I'm unfamiliar with this particular market)

"Master the Art of Photo Manipulation" is a little too emotionally-bleak a headline in my view. You might give a good promise like... "in under a week"...

Or simple things like... Watching you step-by-step/over your shoulder as you perform your techniques. All of these can work. You might also want to split-test "Discover" instead of "Learn", because it seems to drop conversions sometimes.

I like how the banner's eyes point towards "Art System Photoshop". But in this aspect, you might want to split-test with and without the banner too.

Do your prospects:

1. Know exactly what kind of problem they are facing?
2. Know what kind of a solution they want to find?
3. Already know your brand/product?

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owais211 Banned 10 years ago

Congrats for coming up with your new product....its an awesome product.
Great pictures there.I believe you got it right.
Wish you all the best!
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d3communications 10 years ago

First: Congratulations. Stunning art, by the way.

Second: I agree with James Fame. Play with the headlines and see. Get some paid traffic for a few hundred bucks and test.

Finally: In your copy, there are references to "most people" or "anyone" etc. Try and keep the text addressed to your reader:

Ex.
Have you spent hours trawing through hundreds of YouTube videos...

"you", instead of "most people"
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AprilLemarr 10 years ago

Those are beautiful photos you've created.

I agree with the above statement about using you instead of most people or anyone. When I was reading that particular sentence I had the same thought.

It is amazing what you have put together. Good luck!
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elmo033057 10 years ago

I love the whole thing! I also like the way you put incredible art on the page to display that you all really know your stuff! One small thing, Elliot Galbraith's picture is broken and needs to be fixed. Other than that AWESOME dude! I might take you up on this offer! Keep on trucking!

ELMO
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SurrealPSD

10 years ago

Hi guys, thanks so much again for advice and kind words..

Im very pleased to report that this 'first-go' sales page is converting.. First 24 hours, nearly $1000USD. No paid traffic.

Regards 8-)

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svedski

10 years ago

Originally Posted by SurrealPSD

Hi guys, thanks so much again for advice and kind words..

Im very pleased to report that this 'first-go' sales page is converting.. First 24 hours, nearly $1000USD. No paid traffic.

Regards 8-)

First of all: Congrats! (Looks great)

Second of all: How are sales going now...a few days after the first 24 hours?

Third: If you had no paid traffic..then how did you get traffic at all?

Thanks

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James Fame

10 years ago

Originally Posted by SurrealPSD

Hi guys, thanks so much again for advice and kind words..

Im very pleased to report that this 'first-go' sales page is converting.. First 24 hours, nearly $1000USD. No paid traffic.

Regards 8-)

You definitely have a quality product there. Are you running tests? Or tracking your conversion rates? You could definitely split-test and tweak for more conversions, that's for sure.

James Fame

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ReferralCandy 10 years ago

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David Maschke 10 years ago

Looked over your site, and I'd say you hit the center of the bulls-eye on that one.

Excellent salesmanship. Not too hyped up and not bland at all.
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