First of, I hope this is the right section to post this kind of thread. (I made a brief research, and saw a few similar posts who haven't been deleted, so I guess the copywriting forum is the right place)
Ok, so I created this squeeze page:
I bought a solo ad from this website:
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I sent a couple of emails and the person was pretty professional, answering most of my questions very fast, so I decided to give it a go and bought 500 clicks for $200.
I received 568 clicks (so she over delivered pretty nicely) but I had only 5 people who opted in! (1 unsubscribed and the other one didn't confirm his subscription)
I red everywhere that even the crappiest squeeze pages have an optin rate of at least 20%.
What do you think is wrong with my squeeze page? How do you like the wording? Does this look too amateurish?
For my headline, sub headline and pre headline, I tried to get ideas from magazines.com.
I know it misses a couple of things such as a picture of my free report, or a free stamp and I have no idea how to include that in optimize press..
Why do you think I got so little subscribers? What do you think should be my true optin rate percentage? What should I modify?
I appreciate all feedback.
Thank you very much