One Thing You Can Do with Clients Who Have Little Proof

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I'm sure it's no surprise to most copywriters here on this board, but the fact is, proof is one of the most important parts of selling.

There's social proof... and 2 programs I recently noticed come to mind where they have a scrolling list of customers who just bought their program. Fat Loss Factor and Bring the Fresh have a list of people who just bought, and it scrolls down during the sales presentation.

There are testimonials, which of course are one of the weakest forms... since they can be so easily manipulated.

Another thing I do with clients is, I try to BORROW credibility from well-known famous people/companies.

For example, I did a golf ad last year and mentioned how Tiger Woods used their clubs for a short time.

I also had a golf client offer a book by Tiger Woods as one of their bonuses...

I've worked with realtors who sell programs, and always try to use their organizations as credibility... whether it's Remax, Century 21, etc...

I wrote a letter for a software company recently, and listed out all the well known companies who were using this piece of software.

You can use "As seen in" and list out the well known magazines, newspapers, etc... that you were in.

I was in Muscle and Fitness and Men's health once for my fitness articles, so I used those magazines in my ads.

I once wrote a letter for a wine company, and we were able to get permission of the famous people/actors who loved this companies' wine.

One letter I wrote for a soccer program, we were able to mention the name of the professional organization that had used this program with success.

In most niches and markets, if you think hard enough, you can align your product/service with a well known entity and use some of that to "rub off" on your product/service.

There's no reason you can do this to borrow credibility and align yourself with well known products/services/people.
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  • Profile picture of the author Benjamin Farthing
    Just be careful with the legal issues.

    Celebrities are entitled to financial benefits from being celebrities - and that includes using their fame to boost sales. We can't suggest that anyone endorses a product (unless they do, obviously).

    I almost got in trouble once when writing for a smoothie product. I used a teaser that was something like "What meal strategy did Jennifer Lawerence and Daniel Craig use to get in shape for their last films?"

    Before I went with it, I did some legal research.

    If you suggest endorsement of a product where there is none, they can legally destroy you.

    You don't even have to explicitly claim endorsement. Just use their name as part of the ad and they could come after you.

    Michael Jordan's doing it right now: Michael Jordan tells Dominick?s: see you in court - Chicago Business Journal

    (And it's not the first time #23 has sued, either.)

    I assume it's fine to share any big names or companies that have used or talked about your product, but there's some murky grey area there.

    If they've used your product, but never endorsed it, can you advertise the fact that they used it? Or does that suggest endorsement?

    Unless I've got a specific endorsement, I stay away from celebrity mentions.
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  • Profile picture of the author James Clouser
    I had a new client recently whose product was rumored to be used on Bruce Willis. I didn't even touch that (for the reasons mentioned above).

    It doesn't necessarily need to be an implied endorsement, depending on the situation.

    Displaying photos taken with a celebrity (even niche celebrity) is a powerful persuasion tactic. Especially if you're a service provider or consultant.
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  • Profile picture of the author shawnlebrun
    Bingo Ben, it's got to be legit and within legal ramifications.

    I remember all those bogus "Dr. Oz" ads circulating around recently. And Oprah, and so on.

    I'm talking about being legally and actually tied to a well known company/person/product, etc....

    For example, with the client who sold clubs... I didn't even realize Tiger had used the clubs, and gave permission for the person to mention it, until a few conversations in with this client!

    I mean, why the heck wouldn't you bring that up early and often?

    But you're right, you can't just trumpet a person's name around without permission or going the legal route... that's a great way to end up shut down, real fast.
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