Feedback on my first copy?
I've purchased and read portions of Ca$hvertising and found it to be very intriguing.
My website/app will be SAAS based. It's a studying app for the military. Right now I am working on the home page copy. I was wondering if you could provide some feedback on my first iteration of the 3 bullets that will be placed on the home screen.
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Thanks in advance, your time is much appreciated
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