My page designer and I are having a disagreement about the headline and bullet points in the intro box of my landing page.
I am wanting to use more persuasion type copy, but she has not really come across this and says that hers is better because its more straight forward. (she did steal my headline though!)
As I have a really tight budget for testing I would really appreciate some feedback on which one to begin with and any improvements that could be made.
Eventually I would like to switch the long copy to video, is that something that could work for this product could anyone say?
These are the two versions:
Hers : Menopause |
Mine : Menopause 2 |
I am open to any suggestions so please don't hold back. Thanks