My first Online Store - Your review is important for me!

by maxolo
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Hello warriors!
Soon i will be ready with my first affiliate webstore- with cbd oil. I created a website :
www.olej-cbd.pl .

https://translate.google.pl/translat...%2F&edit-text=
(English translation by google)

Its in Polish, i know, you will not understand but let me explain:

I would be pleased if you give me a review of my

Landing page: the picture with hemp seed and text on it: "what would you do if there was a substance which could help you treat your disease?"

Lower we can see the CBD oil description and a link redirecting to webstore.

Under that i put some information about CBD (you can click "more") and get more, detailed info (about production etc)

Below i wrote about the positive aspects of that oil (diseases it can treat, how it help),

Underneath are the customer reviews and FAQ.

My fundamental question is: Is that in a good order? Should the product be featured at the top? Maybe the positive aspects of the oil should be a little bit earlier and more exposed? Maybe it should be less text? Or more?

The second question is about the copywriting. As we know CBD works good for many diseases. How could I expose it? Like you have a weight loss product you just write about how you feel when your are thinner and all the other profits of being slim.

I will be gratefull for each answer
#important #online #review #store
  • Profile picture of the author motleysmart
    ITS VERY NICELY DESIGNED.
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  • Profile picture of the author bigshot90210
    Greetings.


    I have no idea what I read with regards to your site. The layout is excellent and the site is very pretty in a calm way. It reminds me of a black box. The site is a black box. It can not be modified, it does one thing. Collect money. My dear sir, you have a winner!


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  • Originally Posted by maxolo View Post

    Hello warriors!
    Soon i will be ready with my first affiliate webstore- with cbd oil. I created a website :
    www.olej-cbd.pl .

    https://translate.google.pl/translat...%2F&edit-text=
    (English translation by google)

    Its in Polish, i know, you will not understand but let me explain:

    I would be pleased if you give me a review of my

    Landing page: the picture with hemp seed and text on it: "what would you do if there was a substance which could help you treat your disease?"

    Lower we can see the CBD oil description and a link redirecting to webstore.

    Under that i put some information about CBD (you can click "more") and get more, detailed info (about production etc)

    Below i wrote about the positive aspects of that oil (diseases it can treat, how it help),

    Underneath are the customer reviews and FAQ.

    My fundamental question is: Is that in a good order? Should the product be featured at the top? Maybe the positive aspects of the oil should be a little bit earlier and more exposed? Maybe it should be less text? Or more?

    The second question is about the copywriting. As we know CBD works good for many diseases. How could I expose it? Like you have a weight loss product you just write about how you feel when your are thinner and all the other profits of being slim.

    I will be gratefull for each answer
    The design is great . You should get in touch with industry writers in order to promote your products or display ads on google might work for you.
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  • Profile picture of the author SandraDLaurean
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    I think the information provided in your website is quite enough to describe what you are selling only .The design is awsome all in all your website looks good only you have to promote your website .Try google adwords & facebook ads for your website .
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  • Profile picture of the author RichardSalinas
    Impressed with design, Have you started promoting it BTW?
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  • Profile picture of the author davidmiller840
    Hi,
    Very good design of your website but didn't get which language is that.? Use H1 tag which is missing in your website
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  • Profile picture of the author Riccur
    Clean design makes it very easy to get around your site. How is your daily traffic to this site?
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