criticize my page please

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looking to build a list. Bitcoin Party
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  • Profile picture of the author mbacak
    Originally Posted by blackviper View Post

    looking to build a list. Bitcoin Party
    Make it 1 thought, 1 outcome!

    Meaning...

    If you want people to sign up for your list
    to get free bitcoins then tell them just that
    and on the next page tell them how to get
    it and where to get their wallet. Because,
    the page should have 1 purpose.
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  • Profile picture of the author TheFranchiseMarketer
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    I think your site is fine blackviper. If you asked most of the highest earners on the internet the question of what kind of squeeze page pulls the most you will find out that the simplest ones with the most straight forward statements pull the most. Keep that in mind.
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    • Profile picture of the author mbacak
      Originally Posted by TheFranchiseMarketer View Post

      I think your site is fine blackviper. If you asked most of the highest earners on the internet the question of what kind of squeeze page pulls the most you will find out that the simplest ones with the most straight forward statements pull the most. Keep that in mind.
      However, it's not simple as in there is a lot is going
      on and the message is not clear at all. Plus, He's got
      links taking them away from the page.

      The real answer is test but it
      can be beaten quickly as is.
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  • Profile picture of the author blackviper
    Thanks for the feedback. Appreciate it. It is my first attempt. I will incorporate some of the changes and suggestions here.
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    • Profile picture of the author RRG
      You should really look into getting Lead Pages.
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  • Profile picture of the author Phill Wess
    I like the fact that your site is responsive, and it doesn't have typical squeeze page layout, but I'd definitely switch places and push slider to the right.

    Why? Visitors primary focus is top left, and you have a green slider there so they are focused on slider which provides reassuring quotes about bitcoin.

    You should switch focus to your headline and subline to showcase them first, while slider can always provide additional reassurance on the right side.

    One more thing, you need to increase font size for your headline and sub line, and maybe change some keywords to another color or add background and change the font to white color.

    "We will send you 0.0001 Bitcoins for free!" <---- This is the key hook, use it!
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  • Profile picture of the author Developer99
    Yep lead pages is quite good and certainly is easy to use but expensive
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  • Profile picture of the author stackz9front
    I like yor site but I think you should have made the side that ask for contact information green, and made the other side white. I say this because you want to make the side where that ask for contact info stand out more than the other side, and that green makes the other side stand out way more
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  • Profile picture of the author Steeleton
    I'd like to see some more information on the page and some benefit as to why someone should give you their email.

    You want people to join the Bitcoin revolution? Why should they? What's in it for them? If they are new to bitcoins, will they know how much .0001 bitcoin is? It doesn't sound like much.

    Will they learn how to make Bitcoins? Will they learn how to spend Bitcoins? Will they learn what Bitcoins are? I think you need to give someone a very compelling reason to want to be on your list. The goal is to provide information that someone REALLY NEEDS or REALLY WANTS and it's going to make their life easier or better and solve a problem they have. I'm pretty sure .0001 Bitcoins isn't going to change anyone's life.

    Don't want to come across as overly critically, but you did ask for critique of your page
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    • Profile picture of the author discrat
      I agree.

      You need to pre-qualify your Leads better. Otherwise you are going to have a low Quality List of people who just gave your Email because they wanted Free Coins.

      (This would be disastrous in a PPC campaign where you are paying for each Click of people who just want the free coins and nothing more)

      Let them know what other things they could be getting if they give you their email.

      Maybe a Course on Bitcoin or videos on how to make more and where to even start to make more.

      Like I say you need to pre-qualify them better so you have a more targeted List.

      One that will ultimately make you more sales.

      And not just a bunch of tire kickers who want those free coins. Look for serious people and adjust your Sq.Page accordingly.
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  • Profile picture of the author JohnnyPlan
    Your picture sliders were moving too fast for me to read. Maybe it would be the same for others. Also, I didn't even see the subscription box until after trying to read what was on the left side of the page, so I completely missed it.

    Just saying from my own experience as a site visitor.

    Could you put the slider at the top of the page and the optin box right below it around middle of the page?

    You could still fit all your written text about free bitcoins under that.
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  • Profile picture of the author davereineke
    I like the page, however for the person that knows very little about bitcoin they may not know what 0.0001 bitcoins mean or the valu of it.

    The other thing is the "agree" button. Rather put " Give Me Access" or something that doesn't hit triggers of warnings..."Agree" is a very unresponsive term in my opinion.

    Maybe putting less distracting info around the opting box could be taken away. You want the clients attention to focus on just putting their email in. Having distracting text around the opting form only lowers your optin rate.

    You want something inviting like the benefit of what bitcoin can do for a person NOT the Features you get with it. If that makes sense.When most people buy a car they like to know how it will benefit them.

    Hope that helps...
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