JUDGE my squeeze page

What did you do so bad with your 'dog training' ads on FB that got you banned?

Ok, I think you need to get your own domain name rather than using blogspot. I wouldnt ask for the dogs name, and would make the headline more specific, like How To Teach Your Dog To Sit etc, also would change the graphics on the page.

anf last would have a blog on my wevsite rather than using ezine. That way you can build trust and authority and brand yourself.

Yeah, I would get a domain name for sure, they barely cost anything..... Maybe that's why FB banned you? Don't know any other reason why they would unless you are using words in the ad that you shouldn't. I like the design anyway.

Get your own domain name and hosting.

The images are too distracting. Is this one ebook or three ebook? The picture on the lower right show three books.

Why is your opt-in under the fold?

As petkanov mentioned : Find one specific training in your book and focus the site on that.

Are there any good fiverr gigs for promoting my site that you have tried yourself and would like to recommend ?

First of all get your domain name, you'll never reach success with a blogspot domain. Also try to make your design more clean with better headlines and font text.

I'm still very much a newbie, so I can't comment on your squeeze page from a marketer's point of view. But as a potential customer, if I had a dog, and wanted advice on training, it would appeal to me, and I really like the graphics.
There is a lot of work involved in testing, tweaking and whatever else you might be inclined to do, none of which would interest me. Instead, I'd let my mentor take the strain! He would tell me what needed to be done and show me how to do it.
There are mentors in all niches, and probably quite a few in the Dog Training niche. What you might pay for their coaching would be peanuts compared to what you could make by following their advice.
Keep smiling!

It IS too busy. My eye doesn't know where to go.

I don't *hate* the design or the colors...but there is no logical "Look here first...then here second...then here third..." progression as I view the page. More like "...Huh? What's this...And should I be looking at this other thing?...wait...what's this third thing?!"

Direct the eye.

1 - Headline

2 - Copy about the prospect's problem that you are QUALIFYING your visitor for: do they have THIS problem? Because that's what you can solve for them.

3 - Action to take (opt in).

Unfortunately, you have two competing messages on this page:

Stop excessive barking, train to follow commands, and get your dog to respect you

and

Stop chewing.

This is confusing.

Having the article tacked on the bottom makes it confusing.

Which is it? What am I signing up for?

It's best if you choose one message and stick with it.


Since someone asked why the opt in wasn't above the fold, and it is now, I presume you changed the layout after early feedback? And this is what pushed the article text down?


I'd pick ONE key problem with dog training, and stick with it.

Split test several different landing pages each featuring a different problem your training solves. See which has the strongest feedback and then concentrate on that one.

I don't have an issue with your colors or the central graphic. I would remove the signpost with the key problems and the free signup insets and move them beneath that graphic but above the opt-in...possibly turning one or both into text copy ("Are you sick and tired of your dog destroying your sleep by barking all night?" or "Are you fed up with your dog ruining your favorite shoes?").

Maybe keep one of these insets in the header. Test and see what works: you should get a clear idea within 100 visitors.

Are you using a heatmap product? They're free and can track clicks on the page, too. Then you can see how far the visitor got. But you need to give it more time than you'll want to--don't start adjusting things after just 5 or 10 visitors. You need a lot more to make it statistically significant.

Here's what I would do:

First, get a real domain. IMO it looks unprofessional and makes you look like a hack when you use Blogger to set up a squeeze page. I don't mean to be harsh, just constructive criticism. I have lots of squeeze pages that convert at 40% or better, so I like to think I know a thing or two about building them.

One thing that I have learned when it comes to squeeze pages is that simpler is better.

I don't know if you paid someone to do the graphics, or did them yourself, but I would scrap the whole page. I know that isn't what you want to hear, but squeeze pages that are loaded with graphics like that are not converting well anymore.

The squeeze pages that work best for me are the "guru" style, meaning the ones with a content box in the center or to the left or right and then an enticing background photo. Those pages are designed to draw the visitor's attention right to the headline. I have pages that do equally as well and all they are is a headline in big read or black letters that I made with Gimp, and then an email submit box.

Also, there's no need to put anything below the fold. People generally won't scroll down and read any copy below the fold on a squeeze page. Also, if you want the best conversion rates ask for email only. Studies have shown that asking for email only can increase your conversion rates by as much as 8%-12%.

Most important is your headline copy. You have to come up with a headline that almost makes it impossible for the person not to subscribe. Focusing on general dog training is alright, but you'd be better off to pick a specific problem that most dog owners have and then offer a solution.

Then, you could put maybe one or two sentences underneath that describing a few of the tips inside. I wouldn't go much farther than that as far as copy. Basically, you have 2-3 sentences to turn your visitor into a subscriber. People won't read much farther beyond that, and many will stop after the first sentence if they don't find it compelling.

Well, I hope that helps you out.

I agree with most of the other comments but the very first thing I looked at (as will your prospect) is your headline which contains a misspelling of Professional. Sorry if this sounds harsh but if I were in the market for this type of product I would already be questioning the quality of what’s on offer.
There is at least one other spelling mistake above the fold (“comands”). I appreciate it is very easy to miss your own errors ( I suffer with this myself sometimes, as we all do) so a good idea is to get a fresh pair of eyes on it.
Wishing you all the best- keep going until you get it right and keep testing