That was the real feedback I received in the copy writing forum! But, it is pretty much true. So, the question then becomes, does anyone have a source for designers that "get" internet marketing? I'm willing to change it up, but I don't want to throw good money after bad. (and if you must see the sit that makes you go "meh" it is here:
Affordable Workout DVD and Exercise Videos - Lose Weight and Feel Great - the real link is hidden so that the post where we talk about my really terrible site doesn't get indexed by google
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