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Need sales copy help

by logcabinguy
2 replies
Hi,

I have put up a few recipe websites. I am selling an ebook cookbook of niche recipes. If you could review my copy and tell me what else I should add - I'd appreciate it. The site isn't indexed yet so here it is below:

www. raccoonrecipes dot com


Thanks,

Patrick
#copy #sales
  • Profile picture of the author Loren Woirhaye
    You don't have any sales copy to comment on.

    On it's absence I can say this:

    If you want people to pay you money you have to awaken
    desire in them by giving them some glimmer of what they'll be getting.

    Do you shoot raccoons and eat them?

    How bout "If you love killin' varmits as much as I do
    you want to eat 'em too - so I've cooked up over
    50 recipes to turn raccoons into Dinner"
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    • Profile picture of the author edd666666
      You might try posting this in the copy writing forum section to get better response. Good luck, Ed.
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