Please Push Me Off The Diving Board

I have just thrown it out there. I am inspired by Stef and her massive action over this past week.

I am going to finish my product before years end (maybe sooner) and I need a push off the diving board because I have confidence issues with things I have not done before like others and I'm seeing a thread where no one wants to hear a lifes story but I think that is a huge part of (at least 10 pages) of my product. I will wind up with a lot more actually as I have learned so many tricks my biggest problem will be digging them out of my secret vault.

I have some pages written. They are "the story" to build up who I am and it will not be in a 10 page sales letter - it will be optional reading included in the ebook. I have seen the story myself so many times that to me it looks like a "broken record" but It may be helpful to someone so for now it is included.

I am looking for someone to read what I have written and tell me if I should keep going with it or if it is just crap and I'm jumping into a cement pool.

I'm looking for a mix of a couple of different people to look - perhaps someone new to marketing, and someone who has written something that sells.

Anyone care to take a peek?

(girl scratches head and wonders if there are sharks in the pool and if the water is deep enough to jump)