Hits aren't converting?

by jestershaw 2 replies
Thank you to everyone that gave me feedback on my sales page. I have implemented some of the suggested changes. Please take another look and let me know how it looks.


#main internet marketing discussion forum #converting #hits
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  • Profile picture of the author webcashuk
    I am no expert not by any means but here are a few things i thought of.I am guessing GPT means get paid to but not everyone may know that.Is it worth elaborating on that somewhere.On the order form part it says "Only $29.95 for a limited time only" is that too many only's lol? Maybe you also want to provide some proof of earning.One of the things many people may do is read your site then go search for get paid to complete surveys reviews and we both know they get quite a bad name in those reviews, so some proof that you have been earning significant income may make the differance.
    Have you got any reviews of this book from people who have read it and raved about it.?
    REcommendations help to confirm in the readers mind that the product is genuine

    Hope that helps

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    • Profile picture of the author pjs
      I agree with Peter (nice name btw).. a few more things..

      Page should have more meat. More content.

      There is no big call to action. Even the "order button" (which is just an image of the ebook cover) is very plain. I didn't even know where to click to order your product.

      Also, the guarantee is sort thrown into the text. It should really stand out. People have to know their money is safe.

      No testimonials? Get some dude..

      Just my $0.02

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