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I need comments on my website!

by Haruki92
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I am currently into a niche of making money online and have created this website 1 month ago.

I have checked my google analytics but most of the people who went into my webpage did not signed up.

Can anyone tell me whether i should change my website or continue generating traffic to my website.

This is my website
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  • Profile picture of the author imback
    Well for one that video is not yours lol and two yes I would change the header it doesn't look professional enough and the organization needs to be looked at.

    CHAD
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    • Profile picture of the author Haruki92
      Originally Posted by imback View Post

      Well for one that video is not yours lol and two yes I would change the header it doesn't look professional enough and the organization needs to be looked at.

      CHAD
      I am currently an affiliate for Chris Farrell member that is why i added in his video.What header should i change to?Other than that,everything is fine?
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      • Profile picture of the author ProSiteBuilder
        Just my two cents:

        1. Optin Form is below the fold. (User has to scroll down before they see they the optin form)
        2.You mention "FREE BONUS HERE" but there is no mention of what the bonus is or how it can benefit me
        3.The header graphic is awful, either have someone create a header graphic for you (check out fiver for a cheap header) or install a wordpress theme that automatically creates a header for you.
        4. The submit button on the optin form is way to small and "Go" is the wrong word to use" Try "access report now" or " Click here for access" etc ....
        5 The headline is way too generic and non specific to me. Try and find a major selling point of the lead magnet and leverage it to create a great headline. Try writing 50 headlines and then testing your 5 favourite.

        Your going to struggle I would imagine targeting the noobie IM market. It seriously is one the of the most competitive markets on the net. However dont let anyone tell you, you cant do something. With enough time and effort you can be profitable in this market just understand that its going to be a very uphill battle.
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        • Profile picture of the author Haruki92
          Originally Posted by Karim1234 View Post

          Just my two cents:

          1. Optin Form is below the fold. (User has to scroll down before they see they the optin form)
          2.You mention "FREE BONUS HERE" but there is no mention of what the bonus is or how it can benefit me
          3.The header graphic is awful, either have someone create a header graphic for you (check out fiver for a cheap header) or install a wordpress theme that automatically creates a header for you.
          4. The submit button on the optin form is way to small and "Go" is the wrong word to use" Try "access report now" or " Click here for access" etc ....
          5 The headline is way too generic and non specific to me. Try and find a major selling point of the lead magnet and leverage it to create a great headline. Try writing 50 headlines and then testing your 5 favourite.

          Your going to struggle I would imagine targeting the noobie IM market. It seriously is one the of the most competitive markets on the net. However dont let anyone tell you, you cant do something. With enough time and effort you can be profitable in this market just understand that its going to be a very uphill battle.

          How do i install a wordpress theme,i am aware that after installing fantatisco in my cpanel but after that,what should I do?
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          • Profile picture of the author AllanJames
            Originally Posted by Haruki92 View Post

            How do i install a wordpress theme,i am aware that after installing fantatisco in my cpanel but after that,what should I do?
            You search the web and find a theme that suits your blogs purpose, download it then upload it into your blogs theme folder.

            Then, from your blogs admin panel, install the new theme.
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            • Profile picture of the author Haruki92
              Originally Posted by pronetwriter View Post

              Of course,after installing the desired theme you can further tweak the settings to suit your business.
              what software must i use to edit?and after using filezilla to transfer the desired wordpress files,what should i do next?
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  • Profile picture of the author Nick Walker
    Originally Posted by justpro View Post

    your site is not working . It shows the directory not the main page
    He hasn't installed any platforms...

    Hey haruki97, if you are a beginner you will not be pleased with the results after spending hours on this site, because MMO niche is a really competitive niche and it wouldn't be easy for beginners.

    But before that you need to get fantastico and install WP or Joomla.
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    • Profile picture of the author Haruki92
      Originally Posted by Nick Walker View Post

      He hasn't installed any platforms...

      Hey haruki97, if you are a beginner you will not be pleased with the results after spending hours on this site, because MMO niche is a really competitive niche and it wouldn't be easy for beginners.

      But before that you need to get fantastico and install WP or Joomla.
      Yes I am aware of that but i am not using a blog so can i still install wp?I wanted to create a one page website with an opt in form
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  • Profile picture of the author palme
    1 - your url is facts on making money online
    2 - title is Make Money Online For Beginners
    3 - meta description is HOW
    4 - meta keyword is How
    5 - not h1 or h2
    this means SEO=0
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  • Profile picture of the author willyyard
    First of all your website took some time to appear.

    Header image size is big, try to reduce it.

    Header image does not look professional, use good graphics.

    Bottom of the page looks empty and therefore lack to build trust.

    Put phone no on top.

    Put good content.

    Cheers
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  • Profile picture of the author Franz Regan
    Remove the header image as it is not that necessary. That will increase conversion because that will help to see the optin form.
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  • Profile picture of the author bagpuss0001
    Definitely get a backend platform, WP for my 2 cents.
    Also, the banner at the top doesnt look very professional, looks too stretched. Using WP could sort this out.
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