Website Is Finished! - Now what?

Hello,

Congrats on the site... First thing I see is if it is for collecting names it is too many words... and not laid out very well. but you have a great start.

If you want to sell the book the site is not lined up correct Just need to polish the format of the text. Your text seems to be all over the place in size the middle so on... Just some format issue.

Try making the white not so big.

Second thing I feel in your words this happens all the time... You read lies from people or over hyped stats...

Work two minutes and make 10,000.00 type statements...

So then you start a website and you can't get a sale or sign up... there is a secret to this... Most people LIE about their success they are just trying to sell you on their program.

How many time have you seen people ask for help and they show you their website and the headline says How to make 2,483.00 in 30 minutes of work.

For one they must not be following their own system.

People who have never made a sale have websites tell others how to make sales... this is the problem the blind leading the blind.

It's not as easy as other make it look it takes hard work and don't give up. Don't believe all these things you read, most of them are lies.

Recap: Tighten up the format and make the template less wide make it more clear on the sign up better call to action Might add a box around the sign up and make it have a color back ground so it draws people to sign up make bullet points on what they get when they sign up.


Fix a few of these thing and let us see it again

Hope this helps and you doing a great job keep it up.

Richard

Hey Freddie,

One simple thing I noticed from a glance: You might want to put some drool-inducing pictures of Chinese food in between the text. As a customer, I think I'd want to see something that makes me go, 'Wow the food looks awesome! I'm kinda hungry... maybe I'll just take a peek at his recipes?'

I hope that helps - Nothing gets the stomach growling like a good picture of sweet and sour pork!

I agree with the comments from stong and RichardDean. Just wanted to add another small suggestion, perhaps you could add a different purchase button? I suggest using a button layout like this: belcherbutton.com

You need to add picture with the started text and I think you have written too early that " We protect your privacy". I think that form should be removed. And must be placed in the end.

Well done and sticking with it Freddie and in becoming a product creator.

If you have only made a few hundred dollars in a a couple of years in IM then I would go gently with paying for ads because you might be losing a lot of money.

Focus on the conversion side of things and improve that.

You might want to do a radical split test such as sending some traffic to the sales page and sending some others to a squeeze page and then on the thank-you page of the squeeze page show them your sales page.

Also, you might need to start to do some research on where the best places are to get traffic for this type of book are?

If you are not an expert in PPC then finding the best free places to get targeted traffic for your niche is a good option.

Just because you are a product creator now does not mean your margins will be any better, especially if you are buying traffic and you have no affiliates on board.

Congratulations again on persevering. Don't give up, but don't keep doing the same things if they are not working.

Test and improve.

Hi there

Firstly i would recommend you change the title, i visited your site with an open mind as a person searching for Chinese food info

"MY FRIENDS LAUGHED WHEN I TOLD THEM I COULD COOK CHINESE" !!!!!

These words instantly told me that you were not a specialist in this area, but maybe a very good non qualified chef, maybe a good house husband who can cook Chinese Food well !!

At this point i was off in search of what i was looking for "SPECIALIST KNOWLEDGE"

Now please do not mistake my words here, i am sure you are a specialist in Chinese cooking, but what i am trying to say is do not be afraid to make claims of your expertise.

You require a title that makes me think WOW, NOW THIS GUY CAN COOK, IM IN !!

Remember you probably have around 3 seconds to grab the attention of the person who is on your site, that's it, 3 seconds ok

Getting peoples attention is the greatest resource in the world today remember.

Find a catchy heading that grabs like.....

"DISCOVER INSIDE SECRETS OF CHINESE COOKING THAT ARE GUARANTEED TO KEEP YOUR GUESTS COMING BACK FOR MORE"

Then go out and get some testimonials and make sure they are from Chinese people

Also give give and give some more ok, people love freebies, especially when you over deliver, they will leave there mark for an over delivered freebie and you will build instant street cred along the way

Get them on your list and away you go, the rest is Chinese Chopsticks

All the very best to you
Steven