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I am really in need of some help with this will someone please help me out

Cant give you the expertise as most of the warriors here. But I like the idea, will require a lot of work to rank all of those pages to #1 are you going to lease the space as advertising or give them there OWN little website. Have you tried using WP or multipress?

you should try to focus not diversify.

You should improve the layout of your site to make it more user friendly. And if you want to get ranked#1 in Google then you need to plan on how you are going to get traffic, generate content......yada yada.

Best of luck on your journey!

The homepage is all over the place. At first I thought it was organized by alphabetical order, but that is not even true.

You need to have some organization, as a directory; and as others mentioned, at least let the user know from the beginning what exactly this page is supposed to do for them. It's not in any kind of order, it's not categorized by niches, nor by alphabetical order.... it's all over the place.

For example; I see a health and beauty section; well the Day Spa fits underneath that, if you wanted to truly start categorizing it.


Roofing/painting/gutters etc... are a part of home improvement.

That is ONE way to organize it, and I have seen such organization on Article Directories which seems to work out well, and the visitors can seem to navigate it.... BUT only though main headings and subsequent subheadings.

Otherwise, an alphabetic organization may work.

I would maybe, but this is not a 100% recommendation, (as you still have left out many details as to how people even get to the site, or what you expect them to do once on the website etc...) would be to put at the top, a heading or obvious branding; and then a subheading which would say something like:

What's In Biloxi M.S.?

Services Available In Biloxi

Or something like that. I know the wording can be better arranged, but I am trying to say that you should say exactly what all of those links are... are they services? Are they shops/businesses?

Another example which you can look at right now, is "TripAdvisor"... if you google ____keyword___ in _____location_____ you will end up finding a lot of trip advisor listings, that may say "things to do in ____location" or "places to eat in _____location".

That organization is very clear, so even before a person clicks in the search results, they can see from the text on Google exactly what they are clicking into....and once they click in, they see it.

Since you are in fact competing with Trip Advisor, in this very area that you described as a business venture; I will use "Restaurants in Biloxi" as an example; in google. See the image:




As you can see from the image above, the way it is organized is by a few different criteria that the consumer could be seeking.... which I am not seeing with your own website.

Also, the bar on the left, organizes everything for that specific city/location.

I think this is pretty self explanatory, the parts I circled point out many different ways to organize just one specific part of that location, and something that people are searching for.


You can also see how many reviews are sitting there.... which may be useful for a website like yours; so people can be recommended something, because honestly, they are probably coming to your site just to be recommended a name, or a business or something within the keyword they are using.

It doesn't sound like they would be coming to your website, because they know about it all, already. BUT, if they are coming to your site from a specific keyword that they do know about....you still have to organize it a lot better.



When I see this site, I can't help but think about a phone book, and how phone books are organized for residential and business; and even still, they are organized per service alphabetically, or per type of business... that organization is to help the audience find a specific "keyword", easily... based on the organization.

That is not available on your website, whatever keyword they were looking for, is lost in the huge list.

I guess the best recommendation here, is to actually look at what your competition is doing, how they are doing it...and consider why. Some of your competition is very well established, and has a very huge consumer base already existing. Moreover, it is the consumer base themselves, especially with TripAdvisor; who is determining much of the website layout, because it is the consumers who are filling in the website material and who are adding the majority of the content.

Thus, I think it really is in your best interest to see who is outranking you, how their users are functioning on those sites, what it is organized like; because they did not just get that ranking by doing backlinks alone; they got it by the user activity therein, and by giving the end user the freedom to actually control where the site goes, what should be there etc...


About the subdomains:


The same applies as said above, but really, I am just clicking one at random, and chose Florist in Biloxi.

I am on the page now, and I really feel that your pages are not strong enough, and are very dry. You are trying to sell something, and then I am not sure by the end if you actually have ONE flourist you are recommending, or if you just want people to call you, to redirect?

If it is getting redirected, is there an in-between process? The customer may get confused if they are suddenly calling an ACTUAL florist shop, and they still don't even know who they are calling, however....

That process is missing something, from the point where someone is on the page, and wants to speak to someone about a flourist shop...and how they end up speaking to a flourist.

I don't find the words on the pages captivating or interesting either. They are going all over the place as well, and if that were an article, I would find it to be very weak in structure and purpose. The lead-in to the actual number is not strong enough either.

I would maybe attack it more like this, though again, that utterly depends on what it is that you are EXACTLY trying to do here; and it looks like you are trying to get someone to call that number...