What's your gut reaction to this?
What I'd like is some gut reaction feedback from other warriors.
I know we have the copywriting forum, but I'm not really looking for advice as much as I want your gut reaction. Obviously if there is something you think would improve the page let me know, but I'm really just trying to determine if my message is coming across the way I want it to or if I need to find a better way of expressing it.
Any comments would be appreciated. Here's the page...
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