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plz give me feedback !

by ankita
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hi everybody!

plz have a look on my new work
i need your comment or advice how u like my work.

regards
ankita
#feedback #give #plz
  • Profile picture of the author ThePokerEconomist
    I think it's not bad. I feel that the last image on the right kind of clashes. The color transition to purple is to abrupt. Also, (and this is just my opinion) the middle image I feel should be switched to where the Purple image is because the computer screen (black) creates a vertical plane would be better complimented by the end of the truck.

    I would remove the purple image and replace it w/ something else - and put it in the center.
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  • Profile picture of the author artwebster
    Hi, Ankita,

    That is quite an impressive portfolio and should certainly create the right impression when speaking to prospective clients.

    I know this isn't a web site, as such, but it would help if you moved the Tata cover towards the left rather than pinning it to the right side margin.
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    You might not like what I say - but I believe it.
    Build it, make money, then build some more
    Some old school smarts would help - and here's to Rob Toth for his help. Bloody good stuff, even the freebies!

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  • Profile picture of the author ankita
    highly appreciated the above feedback. i'll go through it !

    regards
    ankita
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