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My first ever Squeeze Page

by ChrisJamesG
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Just finished my first squeeze page...I'm pretty pleased with it but i just wanted to know what other people thought...you can find it here:

chrisjamesebooks.com/Free_eBooks/index2.html

Any comments are gratefully received.

Cheers,
Chris
#page #squeeze
  • Profile picture of the author jglover
    excellent job Chris. I wish my first one would have looked like that! :-)
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  • Profile picture of the author Colin Y
    Great job Chris, I'm impress that you included the privacy and terms and condition links. Many beginners forget those important aspects.
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    • Profile picture of the author elitementor
      Chris,

      Fantastic Job. Great Offer, call to action and easy to read!
      and this is your first capture page? Wow!
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  • Profile picture of the author winebuddy
    i'LL BE I was going to poke some fun but not now - I'm going right back and signing into that puppy dog - it's calling me and calling me

    If thats your first one - you will be the next big thing :-)
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  • Profile picture of the author Barbara Wilson
    Very good effort for a first! Clean and easy to read.

    A couple of small suggestions/questions - is your newsletter called "Internet Marketing"? You only refer to it as a/the free internet marketing newsletter - so I wondered if that was the name of it or does it have some other name?

    How often is it published? Daily, weekly, monthly?

    A small typo on Mini-Sites Made Easy ebook - you have "Mini-Sites Made Eady".

    Very nice though. Good luck to you!
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  • Profile picture of the author Bayo
    Originally Posted by ChrisJamesG View Post

    Just finished my first squeeze page...I'm pretty pleased with it but i just wanted to know what other people thought...you can find it here:

    chrisjamesebooks.com/Free_eBooks/index2.html

    Any comments are gratefully received.

    Cheers,
    Chris
    Looks like it will certainly do the business however I have one comment

    Remove the "join Now" button inside the opt-in box because even though it looks good, it's redundant. It doesn't add any value in that position (unless you wanted to link to some other page?)

    Cheers
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  • Profile picture of the author TokiTover
    I think it looks clean and simple..... great job. Yes, also get rid of one of those 'join now' buttons...
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  • Profile picture of the author Jdub2104
    Easy to read, not to long and it keeps me interested the whole way through. Nice Work!!
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  • Profile picture of the author charlie9751
    Hey, I really like it.
    Just the right amount of content and it makes you want to read to the bottom of the page.
    Excellent
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  • Profile picture of the author jwyrick
    I like the button at the top that allows people who have a sincere interest to just click taking them down to the bottom so they can just SIGN UP NOW if they want. I still would recommend adding a video to the top giving an overview on the left and putting a squeeze to the right of that for optimal effect. Leave the rest of the page "as is", including the lower optin for those who take the time to read it, but FREE offers with video often do much better than a typical "lead generation sales / squeeze page".

    Jeffrey S. Wyrick
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  • Profile picture of the author Brad Callen
    Some words of advice. Positive criticism :-)

    I'd replace the 'join now' button with another optin form. Show the optin for twice on the page. I would also contact an ecover designer (you could find one here on the forum) to spice up the borders, and small graphics on your site. You don't necessarily need a header graphic or anything, but you should have nice borders with shading, better check marks, johnson box borders... etc. Basically, just to make your site look more modern. It looks a little to "home made". Put your signature below your headline instead of the typed text for your name. That should get you started and will definitely improve optin rates.

    Brad
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  • Profile picture of the author ChrisJamesG
    Wow...some really good comments and adivce. A massive thank you to everyone :-)
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  • Profile picture of the author OmarNegron
    Hey looks nice and clean.

    One thing I would suggest is have the opt in BOX above the fold of the page. What this means is your visitors will see it without having to scroll down to the bottom of the page like you currently have it...

    Besides that..looks good man!
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    • Profile picture of the author USHwy129
      Originally Posted by OmarNegron View Post

      One thing I would suggest is have the opt in BOX above the fold of the page. What this means is your visitors will see it without having to scroll down to the bottom of the page like you currently have it...
      Agreed, good idea - I had the same thought.
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  • Profile picture of the author Mary Green
    Hey Chris I really like it, I think you should add an optin to the top somewhere as well. It might seem like a crazy idea, but once you get a good buzz about you, more and more poeple will come to the site and just want to optin. Have you considered a popup?
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  • Profile picture of the author tomcam
    Very well done. Looks quite professional. Congrats.
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  • Profile picture of the author sourcecode
    Excellent! I'm even tempted....

    I'd Trade places with the opt in and join now button....
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