I Need The Feedback of The Pros Please...

Regie,

In my opinion both site designs are fine for a standard blog. My comment is that if I were you I would write content about the things I was trying to sell (or refer if you're an affiliate). There doesn't seem to be any focus on shopping per se, as the blog posts are all over the map.

On the second site, for example, the posts are about allergies, ADD, bed wetting, general health, shopping, and weight loss. Where is the focus? Why would a person come to your site looking to make a purchase?

I think a better approach would be to focus on one topic at your site. Let's use bed wetting as an example. If all the articles you have posted were on different aspects of, and solutions to, the problem of bed wetting, then a parent whose child had that problem would have come to a valuable resource. You would be in a position to link to an offer about a bed wetting solution and it would be relevant to your target audience.

As it stands now, your blog isn't set up to cater to any one definable group. The first blog does deal mostly with health issues but there are other posts there as well. The trouble is, no one searches for "health" solutions. The search for arthritis, tennis elbow, and high blood pressure solutions.

Get specific and targeted or I think you're going to have difficulty being seen as a site with value and worth visiting.

The best to you in your business.

Steve

No other "constructive criticism, suggestions, feedback" will do any good until you do exactly what Steve just posted.

I feel that the Virtual Salesman site looks like it's in the dating niche. Maybe you could play around with the color scheme?

Thanks,
Seb

hi had a look at both sites and they are very generic agree with steve completely you need to target and get theme / niche with a clear call to action on what your selling as virtual lady pic is confusing looks like dating niche but then text conflicts

remember to get a blog succesful is a big undertaking and not an easy task if you split your attention trying to build two you will find it hard better to pick just one and work hard to get up going once you get to testing you will see visitors will leave very quickly if not clear on site purpose shopping is too vague a niche its like weight loss there are millions of niches within it drill down and of course check if niche is profitable first before you do all this work hope that helps

You need to get a better writer for a start. This is just terrible: