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I was doing some freestyle writing, whee I just write on a subject off the top of my head without thinking. Below is what I came up with and I felt it would work perfect for this part of the forum. Take a look and I hope you truly do get pumped up reading it.



You must learn how to focus on being a master of attack, strategic and otherwise. Attack with energy and determination. Attack with relentlessness and ruthlessness. Attack with aggression and emotional energy. Attack with godlike focus, will and concentration.

When tested use sheer force of will. Attack with the purpose of draining the life force energy out of whatever it is you're attacking. Attack in order to drain whatever energy you seek to feed on. Attack in a way that wages mental, spiritual and physical warfare on the person or thing it is you're attacking.

Attack in order to leave a psychological impression, a long lasting mark, an energy that will remain. Attack in order to make a person or thing feel in an intense way feelings both physical and emotional that by themselves will become your created soldiers further attacking on your behalf with ruthless aggression.

Attack, attack and attack some more. No matter how dissipated you yourself start to become. Use the energy of the thing or person you're attacking to keep steady with your attack, to fuel your aggression. Even let occasions of submission or defensiveness become forms of powerful attack that take the power and fight out of the thing or person it is you're attacking.

When strongly tested be willing to attack from the bottom of your soul, heart and mind in order to dissipate the power and energy of the thing or person it is you're attacking. Weaponize whatever you need to in your attack, anything you feel can be utilized in order to fuel you or act as force multipliers for your attacks.

The vast majority of the world doesn't act in this way, which is why your willingness to attack, whether directly or indirectly the thoughts, feelings and whatever else it may be of other people or things you want to accomplish will give you an advantage right out of the gate.

Utilize godlike defense when needed, especially if it by itself becomes a form of very powerful psychological attack, but be willing to deliver the steak to the heart of the power source of whatever the person or thing is your attacking. Whether it be people or personal goals you're trying to attack.

Know that in your willingness to attack with a godlike energy is what will allow you to draw to you the energy you need to transcend your environment, negative feelings of your own or others and create whatever reality you want for yourself.

Attack, attack and just when you believe there is no reason to continue to attack, then attack some more and with a beast like aggression and determination to take the power out of whatever the person or thing is you're attacking.
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  • Profile picture of the author Kay King
    "Attack" used about 35 times...


    For me, it's too much drama, over the top, ....but this is definitely the right forum section. Will be interesting to see how others view the text.



    In my experience for myself and others - I've found the more 'hyped' the motivational speech or text is....the quicker the motivation fades.
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    • Profile picture of the author Odahh
      Originally Posted by Kay King View Post

      "Attack" used about 35 times...


      For me, it's too much drama, over the top, ....but this is definitely the right forum section. Will be interesting to see how others view the text.



      In my experience for myself and others - I've found the more 'hyped' the motivational speech or text is....the quicker the motivation fades.
      Non sense can easily sound motivating . A lion will eat a huge meal and sleep for a week . And when a male lion take over a pride it kills all the cups to put the lioneses in heat .

      Its antelope and herd animals who are always moving always working to eat .

      But motivation need no tie to reality . Or reason.

      Anyone of met or talked to in the last few years with any level of success .had a level of obsession doing what they where doing

      And so they would try new things to see if they got better results more production higher quality lower cost . Higher returns.

      The thing motivated them to do it . They never needed outside motivation to do it. Unless life happened to blow up around them and they lost the drive
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    "Attack" used about 35 times...


    For me, it's too much drama, over the top, ....but this is definitely the right forum section. Will be interesting to see how others view the text.



    In my experience for myself and others - I've found the more 'hyped' the motivational speech or text is....the quicker the motivation fades.

    Using the word repeatedly was the goal in order to drill it in.
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      Originally Posted by pheonix44 View Post

      Using the word repeatedly was the goal in order to drill it in.
      drill is boring - think about it
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  • Profile picture of the author pheonix44
    Its antelope and herd animals who are always moving always working to eat
    Don't mean to come off the wrong way, but is this a good thing or bad thing?
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    • Profile picture of the author Odahh
      Originally Posted by pheonix44 View Post

      Don't mean to come off the wrong way, but is this a good thing or bad thing?
      The way animals are is how they are it is pointless to judge them good or bad.

      But when a motivation speak says you should be like a lion . The last thing they want you to do is actually be like a lion .

      Eat once a week have many mates . Sleep most of the time let the woman do the work most of the time and when you get a new group of mate kill all their babies so they will only be raising yours .

      How about a bear gorge yourself for 6or 7months then sleep for 4 or five months

      Even sharks especially great whites will binge then go months without eating as they swim to the next feeding ground .

      No you are human livestock and should spend every possible moment working so the tax man getsas much money from you as possible then the landlord if you rent orthe bank if you have a mortgage then the car either the note or the I Durance then food and on and on

      Human livestock .taxpayers,consumers,human capital

      If you found a way to cover all your personal monatary needs with very little work . You would belooked at by a majority of the other human cattle as sinfully greedy and lazy

      Unless you are born rich or royalty
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  • Profile picture of the author Kay King
    It's the basics of nature - most wildlife 'attacks' only when it feels threatened, to defend its territory, or when it needs food.



    Using an action word like 'attack' over and over is more likely to result in loss of power of the word than in increased motivation of the reader...in my opinion.
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    Wow, that's some aggressive freestyle you got going on there, Robin.

    I'm not sure if it's suppose to be motivational... or a call to violence?

    Seeing as how words are the outlay of our internal thoughts, I have to ask... Are you feeling a little angry about something?
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  • tbh I would wanna lay back awhile all stillsum, see if I can figure out what is gowin' on.

    That way, when I schloop up offa my ass into the vertical, mebbe my limbs gonna be more directed sumplace ccol.

    If ima attack, for sure I don't wanna fire off at random less'n I vaporize my energies an' take out the eyeballs of innocents with my inadvertently weaponized flyin' boobies.

    Gotta figure Bruce Lee had it right when he said,

    "People think kung fu is all about fighting. But the truth is ... it is more about remaining still and watching to see who is stupidest first."

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    • Profile picture of the author Claude Whitacre
      Originally Posted by pheonix44 View Post

      I was using it as more motivation in regards to attacking goals.
      I think you said "Attack" when the word "Strive' may have been more descriptive (although not read as well) . Am I right?
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    • Profile picture of the author Frank Donovan
      Originally Posted by pheonix44 View Post

      I was using it as more motivation in regards to attacking goals.
      You know what the biggest market is for motivational books? Those who've bought a motivational book in the last 18 months.

      That suggests at least two things: 1) The motivational books can't be all that effective, and 2) The buyers are using them for a quick dopamine hit of enthusiasm and when that wears off, they need to find another motivational product to replace it.

      So what's your intention with your writing? Do you want to join the crowded ranks of the self-help merchants who feed on the hopes of dreamers? If so, you'll need a more compelling message than yet another, non-specific call-to-arms. A credible back story wouldn't hurt, either.

      But if your aim is to help people, you'll need to focus less on the rah-rah, and more on providing practical advice, with actual steps that they can follow. As it stands, your piece contains nothing of that.
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      • Profile picture of the author Odahh
        Originally Posted by Frank Donovan View Post

        You

        That suggests at least two things: 1) The motivational books can't be all that effective, and 2) The buyers are using them for a quick dopamine hit of enthusiasm and when that wears off, they need to find another motivational product to replace it.

        But if your aim is to help people, you'll need to focus less on the rah-rah, and more on providing practical advice, with actual steps that they can follow. As it stands, your piece contains nothing of that.
        One thing I have been studying when I can is some of the research on how important dopamine is .

        And it turns out getting a full night's sleep and healthy interactions with other humans are critical .

        Healthy context of dopamine is work get reward get dopamine hit, relax bask in the mild high then go back to work .

        Sugar give a big dopamine hit but in nature things with a lot of sugar are packed with nutrition or fiber .after all sugar cane is a stick . Lots of nutrients and fiber .

        If you develop a vision for how you want your life ,set goals from that vision. Then build systems and change the habitat around you to support doing what you need to do on a daily basis . So you get rewards daily some way. That is good

        But if get in the cycle of needing the motivational dopamine hit before you do something. It's common people avoid the actual work the need to do to accomplish something . And then look for more and more ways to get motivated
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        • Profile picture of the author Frank Donovan
          Originally Posted by Odahh View Post

          But if get in the cycle of needing the motivational dopamine hit before you do something. It's common people avoid the actual work the need to do to accomplish something . And then look for more and more ways to get motivated
          Yes, that feeling of being "motivated" can be addictive. But the feeling is transient and on its own won't accomplish much - it only leads people to seek out yet more sources of motivation. And there's no shortage of cheerleaders churning out all those comforting "you can do it" messages.

          However, while that generic "go for it!" advice can offer a temporary boost of enthusiasm, it mistakes motivation for inspiration. Inspiration mostly comes from actual achievement and example, rarely from empty rallying cries.

          People need a concrete incentive to act. If your livelihood, or that of your family, is on the line, that's a solid reason. But generally, those who are truly motivated to do something find that motivation internally. They don't need any external encouragement or continuous reinforcement.
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          • Profile picture of the author Claude Whitacre
            Originally Posted by Frank Donovan View Post

            Yes, that feeling of being "motivated" can be addictive. But the feeling is transient and on its own won't accomplish much - it only leads people to seek out yet more sources of motivation. And there's no shortage of cheerleaders churning out all those comforting "you can do it" messages.
            There are also self help seminar groupies. It's the experience itself that they are after, the group reinforcement of their beliefs.

            It's why guys like Tony Robbins sells tickets to 5 day events. It's the experience of the event itself that draws so many people...mostly repeat attendees.

            I used to attend marketing events, and found out that there were people that treated them like a vacation. They just wallowed in the experience, the activity.. Like people that go on cruise ships and never get off.
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              Originally Posted by Claude Whitacre View Post

              There are also self help seminar groupies. It's the experience itself that they are after, the group reinforcement of their beliefs.

              It's why guys like Tony Robbins sells tickets to 5 day events. It's the experience of the event itself that draws so many people...mostly repeat attendees.

              I used to attend marketing events, and found out that there were people that treated them like a vacation. They just wallowed in the experience, the activity.. Like people that go on cruise ships and never get off.
              Thank you for this interesting insight Claude. It makes perfect sense. Some people go on cruise ships, some go to film festivals or burning man, and some go to motivational seminars.

              I say if just the excitement of being there fulfills all their expectations, then more power to 'em.

              I guess there's worse hobbies a person can spend their money on.
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              • Profile picture of the author Odahh
                Originally Posted by SARubin View Post

                Thank you for this interesting insight Claude. It makes perfect sense. Some people go on cruise ships, some go to film festivals or burning man, and some go to motivational seminars.

                I say if just the excitement of being there fulfills all their expectations, then more power to 'em.

                I guess there's worse hobbies a person can spend their money on.
                The main problem many people have is their lives are fine and actually real comfortable .

                But boring . The next big trend you will see is the people who no longer get the dopamine fix from social media .

                And start doing things like going places and leave cell phones and computers at home .
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            Originally Posted by Frank Donovan View Post

            Yes, that feeling of being "motivated"

            People need a concrete incentive to act. If your livelihood, or that of your family, is on the line, that's a solid reason. But generally, those who are truly motivated to do something find that motivation internally. They don't need any external encouragement or continuous reinforcement.
            Motivation is the process of getting hyped up to do something you really do not want to do . But have been convinced you should or must do.

            There are people who really want to be doctors and lawyers and become obsessed with doing what they need to do to go through the 10years of schooling after highschool and puting in the gtime to get the grades in highschool .

            Then there are the people motivated by money . Or doing it to please mom or because their family are doctors or laywers

            It's more than passion or motivation .. is streight up obsession
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    When I hear the word "strive" I think struggle. When I hear the word "attack" I think fight, persevere, taking action, etc.
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    • Profile picture of the author Odahh
      Originally Posted by pheonix44 View Post

      When I hear the word "strive" I think struggle. When I hear the word "attack" I think fight, persevere, taking action, etc.
      Then you have never been in any real danger . Or attacked anything that could fight back or possibly harm or kill you.

      Special forces are like 95percent training preparing and planing . 5percent action .

      The only instance where anything is 100 percent attack are insects like ant and bees .who's only purpose tend to be killing attackers to save the hive
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    In the context of a business forum, why all the emphasis on attacking people?I can understand attacking goals but this aspect turned me off big time.the first time I read it.

    In my life I try to not attack people to get something. If I attack, it's because they've hurt someone I love. But not to achieve something or to win.

    I may attack a competitor's products or customer service record but that's not the feeling I got from the post. I got to attack the people and to the death.

    For me, I wasn't motivated to do anything but to avoid your future writings. No offense intended--not an attack--just my opinion.

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    Like people that go on cruise ships and never get off.
    Can you really do this?

    The next big trend you will see is the people who no longer get the dopamine fix from social media .

    And start doing things like going places and leave cell phones and computers at home .
    I believe the next big trend is people going a step above social media and having virtual spouses. Not online dating per se, but completely custom programmed AI spouses who will call them, interact with them online and send quirky text messages at random throughout the day.
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    • Profile picture of the author Odahh
      Originally Posted by pheonix44 View Post

      Can you really do this?



      I believe the next big trend is people going a step above social media and having virtual spouses. Not online dating per se, but completely custom programmed AI spouses who will call them, interact with them online and send quirky text messages at random throughout the day.
      Well once they get low cost robotic sex dolls that don't weigh 250pounds I can see some men wanting the overly jealous never leave you alone AI.

      But right now the cost and the weight Is a problem.and the dolls are human looking enough but once the robotic features are added .it sets off a repulision or creepyness in a percentage of people
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    • Profile picture of the author Claude Whitacre
      Originally Posted by pheonix44 View Post

      Can you really do this?

      I don't know if you can do it forever, but some people (usually they are retired) just stay on the boat...for cruise after cruise. I'm not sure how much it costs, but people do it. Like there are people that just live in nice hotels.
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      • Profile picture of the author Odahh
        Originally Posted by Claude Whitacre View Post

        I don't know if you can do it forever, but some people (usually they are retired) just stay on the boat...for cruise after cruise. I'm not sure how much it costs, but people do it. Like there are people that just live in nice hotels.
        I heard something about chains of resorts in central and South America where you buy a years worth of staying for 20-30grand USD and three gormet meals a day for another fee.and never have to leave the resort .or move from resort to resort
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    Well once they get low cost robotic sex dolls that don't weigh 250pounds I can see some men wanting the overly jealous never leave you alone AI.

    But right now the cost and the weight Is a problem.and the dolls are human looking enough but once the robotic features are added .it sets off a repulision or creepyness in a percentage of people

    Wasn't really talking about sex dolls, but just the interaction itself. Think about how advanced AI is and will become. You don't think that having someone call you on the phone who sounds like whatever gender you wanted, the voice you wanted and could interact with you how you wanted wouldn't appeal to a large number of lonely people both men AND women? The attention, even if it's just super advanced AI? Sending loving text messages that when you respond to them it responds back until you've decided you've had enough. Email correspondence with AI that seems like a real person along with online chatting? I'm talking just the interaction, no physical contact of any kind. For a lot of people this is all they really want. The attention, feeling like there's someone who is focused solely on them and no one else in a day and age where everyone seems to have a million and one things pulling at them for their attention.
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    The main thing that drives the development of non military technologies . Especially thing like technology and internet .Is porn video games and piracy .

    Yes the ai you are talking about will be developed. But it is highly probable it will be a marketing tool for the sex robot industry .

    Woman tend not to date men who are less educated or make less money and as woman get more degrees and better education. And better prospect of earning .

    So yes get the ai and tune it so that it has the perfect personality . Then get the perfect robot body for the man's taste . Or if he want a couple at once or some deal where he leases a robot for a few months then trades it in for a newer one .
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    The main thing that drives the development of non military technologies . Especially thing like technology and internet .Is porn video games and piracy .

    Yes the ai you are talking about will be developed. But it is highly probable it will be a marketing tool for the sex robot industry .

    Woman tend not to date men who are less educated or make less money and as woman get more degrees and better education. And better prospect of earning .

    So yes get the ai and tune it so that it has the perfect personality . Then get the perfect robot body for the man's taste . Or if he want a couple at once or some deal where he leases a robot for a few months then trades it in for a newer one .

    i think we need to be having this discussion on a different type of platform.
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    • Profile picture of the author Odahh
      Originally Posted by pheonix44 View Post

      i think we need to be having this discussion on a different type of platform.
      Well we can move back to talking about motivation .

      The diversion end up dealing with basic human motivations . And if you look at it the same basic disagreement .

      So far you don't seem to think the physical manifestation or things physically happening are that important or nessesary.

      When they are highly critical and a basic need for a healthy human being .

      Yes the same kind of people who get hooked on motivation. But never carry it out to actually physically accomplish anything may move on to interacting with an AI that really seems to care . With no follow up physical experience.

      There is the dopamine cycle one can get from motivation and doing the motivational things 1or two hours a day .

      Or someone can spend that hour actually physically improving their life and get the dopamine from that .

      It's fine if you need motivation initially . But if after a few years if you are not doing things on a daily basis that provide motivation from doing them .

      Start looking for that stuff
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    Originally Posted by pheonix44 View Post

    When strongly tested be willing to attack from the bottom of your soul, heart and mind [/I]
    Well in that attack, I hope you win the battle.
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      Originally Posted by pheonix44 View Post

      i do to friend. I do to.
      I stumbled onto a secret by accident the last few months .as I was able to live a much better standard of living or level of comfort .than I have most of my life .

      Now I'm back town to just a little bit above the norm.

      And the standard of living I am now aiming for is much higher than what I was living the last few months .

      I want to buy about five acres of land and build a small house all for cash.and do a few others thing I won't mention here.

      I'd rather die than not get it .

      If you want to attack anything in your life attack the low standards you accept in your life .set the standards for the way you want to live . The set the goals that will support those standards .
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    If you want to attack anything in your life attack the low standards you accept in your life .set the standards for the way you want to live . The set the goals that will support those standards .
    I couldn't agree more.
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    I want to buy about five acres of land and build a small house all for cash.and do a few others thing I won't mention here.

    I'd rather die than not get it .

    So the question is: Are you willing to live in a way that leads to that result? It's not an unreasonable goal, especially if you choose an area where land prices are reasonable and building codes are not too restrictive.



    One 'attack' is all you need - the willingness to do what is required of you to reach the goals you set for yourself. That's the hard part.


    "Dying" is a given - it's what happens before that ....that counts.
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    • Profile picture of the author Odahh
      Originally Posted by Kay King View Post

      So the question is: Are you willing to live in a way that leads to that result? It's not an unreasonable goal, especially if you choose an area where land prices are reasonable and building codes are not too restrictive
      I just moved down to Florida , plenty of cheap land .start the business I want to start pretty soon and work the land purchase and building the house I want to build into business expenses.

      Use half the house to live in the other half to grow sprouts/microgreens then build a few other buildings to grow shiataki and oyster mushrooms .
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    Microgreens sounds like it might be code for something else.
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