I am getting married!
I am not sure if this is the right section but I really need your help. My wedding is fast approaching and our wedding organizers informed me to prepare an English vow for my future wife.
Here's what I have written and please do some necessary corrections and suggestions.
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You are God’s precious gift to me, my springtime, my hope and my joy.
You are everything that’s pure and true. And I adore you with my mind, body and soul.
How blessed I am to be able to say that you are mine, to be able to love and cherish you for the rest of my days.
I vow to always be there, to comfort you in your sorrow, and rejoice with you in your victories.
I promise to love you all my life with all my heart.
I pledge to be there when you need me, to fill your days with sunshine, to comfort and encourage you, to be your never-ending best friend, and to love you all my life, with all my heart, for so long as we both shall live.
I will trust and honor you, I will laugh and cry with you.
I will love you faithfully, through the best and the worst, through the difficult and the easy.
What may come I will always be there. As I have given you my hand to hold, so I give you my life to keep.
May our hearts and every breath become one as we unite this day as husband and wife!
I swear to be your true love from this day forward and forevermore.
God will be the foundation of our marriage.
I love you so much Mylene, my precious wife, best friend and overall partner.
Personally, I am so excited and quite nervous as well. Your help will be very much appreciated. You can add something if you like and I will truly admire it.
What do you think of the grammar?
Thanks a lot!
P.S. I just added these two lines:
I can’t guarantee that there will be no problems but I can promise that we are going to face them together.
There’s no way that we won’t argue in some occasions but this simply shows that our brains our working in order to have the best solution.
What do you think my fellow warriors?
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