I buy a lot of books for my Kindle. When I see a book description that sounds good I go to the page on Amazon and often read a couple of reviews before I buy.
A couple days ago I saw a plot (mystery) that sounded interesting so off to read the reviews. Didn't buy the book but had a good laugh at reader comments...
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Iris doesn't cry. Tears prick her eyes. She doesn't get angry. Rage coils in her belly. She doesn't get frustrated, Helplessness presses down on her hard enough to make her breathless. ...these descriptions ...crowd the pages.
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Putting yourself in Iris's shoes will make you want to cut off your feet
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