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What Exactly Are My Doing Wrong With?

by Brotherly
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Hello Friends,

Top of the day to you all.

I'll like to hear from the house what exactly i'm doing wrong with site My Blog.

I'm a newbie to webdesign

Kindly advice me.

Regards.
  • Profile picture of the author lcombs
    Your header is way too big.

    You're not describing what your business is clearly enough.
    You need to engage your visitors and grab their attention quickly.
    Open your site with an article like a letter to a friend.

    Hi so-and-so.
    Welcome to our web site.
    We are ......
    etc., etc.
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  • Profile picture of the author Jason Kanigan
    Right up front it needs to be clear in big letters that this is a site for ACCOUNTS and ACCOUNTING STUDENTS. That was not clear to me upon arrival.

    Please hire a native English speaker to correct the grammar and wording. Much of it has errors.

    Move the opt-in box above the fold.

    The Services page is blank.

    You actually do not have any blog entries.

    The problem is that you do not have a complete site, and you do not have anything for sale.
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  • Profile picture of the author Dennis Gaskill
    I get a full screen of white space on IE when the page loads. No content in sight until I scroll.

    By the way, this should be posted here: Website Design
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    Just when you think you've got it all figured out, someone changes the rules.

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