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by installler2001
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Hello Every one,

Well i require your little help .

I work in an FMCG Snacks company as Marketing Trainee & our product includes chips and nimco .

My Boss wants to use " OLD TRADITION WITH NEW TWIST/CRISP " as our tagline . But i am not convinced with this. Can you guys help me in suggesting better tag Line ?


Your help in this regard is highly appreciated .
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  • Profile picture of the author Jason Z
    I feel like you should use a word like "Classic" instead of Old.
    Like Classic Tradition or Classic Quality or Classic Taste

    But I think the tagline should be catchier and more lively than his suggestion.
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  • Profile picture of the author Jason Kanigan
    Try posting this in the Copywriting forum. You'll get good responses there as well.
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  • Profile picture of the author installler2001
    Hello Sir. I am writing u this email in reference to your reply on warrrior forum.
    Well My brand (XYZ) is healthy goodness that makes you crave every bite. High in protein and containing a good amount of calcium, XYZ supersedes the bounds of nimco-ness and leaps into a category of its own .

    Now what message should i portray in my advertisements ??
    Kindly suggest me one tag line ???
    Thanks a lot in advacne .
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  • Profile picture of the author Brendan Vraibel
    The copywriting section is your best bet. Some of those guys over there are lots of help with this sort of thing.
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