Elevator Pitch in this situation?

by a_dude
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I've only high-school diploma and I've a job I'm not proud of, which has nothing to do with what I wanna do later in life.

So what can I say in my elevator pitch? I have technical skills, but nothing to show, so do I have management and analytic skills, but once again - nothing to show. I've only worked "behind the curtains," unofficially, with no pay and no credit. I'm 20. I'm asking because I'm going to go to a conference next week, which is about IT and I'm aiming to talk to some business professionals. Basically, when they ask me what I do, I have to have something to say.

Any questions/advice is welcome.
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  • Profile picture of the author Claude Whitacre
    Are you looking to get a client or two? Or are you just trying to describe what you do?
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  • Profile picture of the author digichik
    I need just a little more information about what kinds of skills you do have, and what you are wanting to pitch.

    Do not be ashamed that you don't have a college degree, going to college right now doesn't provide a good return on the investment. Perhaps, you decided to lthat it was a better investment of your time and money to start your own business. Remember, Bill Gates, Mark Zuckerburg and many others do not have college degrees. I have two that are almost worthless to me. Some of the 'dullest knives in the drawer' have MBAs.

    What's important is that you develop a strong sense of self(self esteem), confidence, seek knowledge, develop skills on your own and learn to listen, evaluate and absorb knowledge.

    Much of what is taught right here in this forum is more valuable than what you would learn in any business school in the country.


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  • Profile picture of the author Andrew H
    So you have technical skills? You need to showcase them. Build out a personal project that shows these skills. Anybody can say they have 'x' skill, but if you can actually demonstrate this skill that will put you above the wannabes.
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  • Profile picture of the author CudaFish
    You clearly have an edge, being a young buck with a lot to prove and a lot of skills to back it up.

    Just drum up conversation and talk about pain points. Things that business owners deal with day to day that make their life more difficult. And then talk about solutions to those problems!

    Things like more effective advertising, the downfall of print media, the upswing of social media, google shakeups. Just talk with business owners in this case, and you'll get people who will hear you out. And you can really fix issues they have. And THAT'S how you'll truly grow your business and be of honest help to them.

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    • Profile picture of the author a_dude
      Originally Posted by Claude Whitacre View Post

      Are you looking to get a client or two? Or are you just trying to describe what you do?
      I'm looking to describe myself as a guy who is interested in getting a decent job and actually WANTS it, who has career goals, etc..

      Originally Posted by digichik View Post

      I need just a little more information about what kinds of skills you do have, and what you are wanting to pitch.

      Do not be ashamed that you don't have a college degree, going to college right now doesn't provide a good return on the investment. Perhaps, you decided to lthat it was a better investment of your time and money to start your own business. Remember, Bill Gates, Mark Zuckerburg and many others do not have college degrees. I have two that are almost worthless to me. Some of the 'dullest knives in the drawer' have MBAs.

      What's important is that you develop a strong sense of self(self esteem), confidence, seek knowledge, develop skills on your own and learn to listen, evaluate and absorb knowledge.

      Much of what is taught right here in this forum is more valuable than what you would learn in any business school in the country.


      Check out these University of the Warrior Forum Professors:

      Claude Whitacre
      Jason Kanigan
      John Durham
      KenMichaels
      IamNameless
      EwenMack
      PanteraIM
      Sandalwood
      DavidMiller
      DeidraRenee
      TheBigBee

      Just to name a few
      I have technical understand of how a computer works, able to do simple things like assembling, assessing a good hardware configuration, using various software (not Adobe suit, etc., just configuring anti-virus, etc.), have an understanding of programming logic and potential algorithms. My end-goal is the management, as I've managed a few teams and such (including technical workflow) and I really enjoyed it. Mainly because I was able to provide an efficient way of doing things, choosing what's the useful thing to do and I didn't have to utilize any technical skills.

      Other than that, I can talk pretty well I think, I'm quite confident, I seek knowledge about various subjects, which also leads to me developing my own skills, like basic site programming, etc.. But once again - I do not enjoy such, which means I didn't go too far with learning any programming languages either.

      Originally Posted by Andrew H View Post

      So you have technical skills? You need to showcase them. Build out a personal project that shows these skills. Anybody can say they have 'x' skill, but if you can actually demonstrate this skill that will put you above the wannabes.
      Great idea. But there's one problem: what personal project would say that I have the skills mentioned above?

      Originally Posted by CudaFish View Post

      You clearly have an edge, being a young buck with a lot to prove and a lot of skills to back it up.

      Just drum up conversation and talk about pain points. Things that business owners deal with day to day that make their life more difficult. And then talk about solutions to those problems!

      Things like more effective advertising, the downfall of print media, the upswing of social media, google shakeups. Just talk with business owners in this case, and you'll get people who will hear you out. And you can really fix issues they have. And THAT'S how you'll truly grow your business and be of honest help to them.

      - Mark Cuda
      That's a good idea, it may actually allow me to make some contacts.

      @Dan McCoy Wow, that was really useful! Right now my sleepy mind is trying to tie everything I've read so far, including your post, and make out on how I can use that.

      P.S. I've to get some sleep now, but I'll definitely give a more descriptive reply tomorrow, to everything. Just wanted to pitch in and answer some questions today, so there may be even more ideas available tomorrow when I'm back from work.
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  • Profile picture of the author DaniMc
    Forget about an elevator pitch. Imagine how you feel when you ask someone a simple polite question like "how are you" or "what do you do" and they proceed to tell you in great detail.

    Here is the bottom line: People like to talk about themselves. So, if you want to be one of those people who knows how to work a room, don't talk about yourself. Turn every question and comment back into something relevant for the other person.

    "So, what do you do?"

    I work with business owners to "X" - Something kind of vague that causes curiosity

    "Oh really, how's that work?"

    "Well, tell me a little about "X" and I can give you an example" - This will get them talking in the direction of your product and will open ways for you to help them. If they don't respond to this approach, go talk to others who will.

    At this point, it is important to ask questions and give compliments. Let them feel proud of who they are what they do. As you are asking questions, you are looking for ways that your service fits into what they do. Most people just blab on and on and expect the prospect to figure out how to use them. That is the wrong approach. It is YOUR job to find out how you can help them, make it relevant, and get them thinking.

    Use words like "I wonder if" - "Imagine if" - "That makes me think about"

    The first goal of any conversation is to get people to imagine using your service. Long before we decide to buy something, when we first become aware of it, we immediately try to imagine ourselves using a product. If we don't make that imaginary connection, we will never buy it until we do.

    So, by being a little vague at first, their imagination fires up and starts to try and figure out this puzzle. The mind cannot resist an unanswered question.

    Then, as you describe it in ways that are relevant to them, and begin to use descriptive language that causes them to imagine using your service, you are already halfway to a sale. This takes a little practice but you can get it.

    Lastly, don't offer them a card. If you did this correctly, they will ask YOU for a card. At which point you can pat your pockets as if you aren't sure where they are. Make them wait a few seconds for the card, don't just fire one out there.

    Now, make sure you ask for a card in return. A few days later send them an email that it was nice chatting and that you'll give them a call sometime. A few days after that, give them a call, continue the conversation by starting with a good piece of info (I read something the other day that reminded me of our conversation), and ask to set a time when you can come visit.
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    • Profile picture of the author arlittell
      Originally Posted by Dan McCoy View Post

      Forget about an elevator pitch. Imagine how you feel when you ask someone a simple polite question like "how are you" or "what do you do" and they proceed to tell you in great detail.

      Here is the bottom line: People like to talk about themselves. So, if you want to be one of those people who knows how to work a room, don't talk about yourself. Turn every question and comment back into something relevant for the other person.

      "So, what do you do?"

      I work with business owners to "X" - Something kind of vague that causes curiosity

      "Oh really, how's that work?"

      "Well, tell me a little about "X" and I can give you an example" - This will get them talking in the direction of your product and will open ways for you to help them. If they don't respond to this approach, go talk to others who will.

      At this point, it is important to ask questions and give compliments. Let them feel proud of who they are what they do. As you are asking questions, you are looking for ways that your service fits into what they do. Most people just blab on and on and expect the prospect to figure out how to use them. That is the wrong approach. It is YOUR job to find out how you can help them, make it relevant, and get them thinking.

      Use words like "I wonder if" - "Imagine if" - "That makes me think about"

      The first goal of any conversation is to get people to imagine using your service. Long before we decide to buy something, when we first become aware of it, we immediately try to imagine ourselves using a product. If we don't make that imaginary connection, we will never buy it until we do.

      So, by being a little vague at first, their imagination fires up and starts to try and figure out this puzzle. The mind cannot resist an unanswered question.

      Then, as you describe it in ways that are relevant to them, and begin to use descriptive language that causes them to imagine using your service, you are already halfway to a sale. This takes a little practice but you can get it.

      Lastly, don't offer them a card. If you did this correctly, they will ask YOU for a card. At which point you can pat your pockets as if you aren't sure where they are. Make them wait a few seconds for the card, don't just fire one out there.

      Now, make sure you ask for a card in return. A few days later send them an email that it was nice chatting and that you'll give them a call sometime. A few days after that, give them a call, continue the conversation by starting with a good piece of info (I read something the other day that reminded me of our conversation), and ask to set a time when you can come visit.
      I've been following along here a little while, and this advice really connected with me. As an introvert who has a hard time with conversation, this seems like a simple concept that even I can try. Thanks for passing out nuggets like this for us new guys to pick up.
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  • Profile picture of the author misterme
    I'd think what you want to do is make yourself useful to those you'd like to have as mentors. See what they need done and offer to help them out. Your elevator pitch so to speak then is about being hungry to learn and willing to help.
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  • Profile picture of the author a_dude
    Unfortunately I am not able to go to the conference, my employer doesn't think it's education, even though other co-workers are going. Suppose it's because I'm new.

    Thanks everybody, though.
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  • Profile picture of the author Andrew H
    Unfortunately I am not able to go to the conference, my employer doesn't think it's education, even though other co-workers are going. Suppose it's because I'm new.
    Your plan was to go to this conference, that your employer was presumably paying for, and try to find new employment? Your employer probably recognized that and thus made his decision to exclude you.

    If you are really looking to go and you think this conference will be worth while you should buy your own ticket and take the day off work.
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    • Profile picture of the author a_dude
      Originally Posted by Andrew H View Post

      Your plan was to go to this conference, that your employer was presumably paying for, and try to find new employment? Your employer probably recognized that and thus made his decision to exclude you.

      If you are really looking to go and you think this conference will be worth while you should buy your own ticket and take the day off work.
      My employer was informed that I'm going there for educational purposes and as far as he knows, I like my job. But who knows, some people really do think random nonsensical things, and I don't have a really honest answer on why I can't go.

      I can't yet. I have to work for I think 8 months before I can take vacation. I haven't yet. :/ Oh, and I did propose to buy my own ticket.
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      • Profile picture of the author DaniMc
        Originally Posted by a_dude View Post

        My employer was informed that I'm going there for educational purposes and as far as he knows, I like my job. But who knows, some people really do think random nonsensical things, and I don't have a really honest answer on why I can't go.

        I can't yet. I have to work for I think 8 months before I can take vacation. I haven't yet. :/ Oh, and I did propose to buy my own ticket.
        This is why it is important to make a plan for yourself so you no longer have to suffer the indignities of corporate servitude.

        For those who are OK being an employee, it's not such a problem. But it seems you have the "bug" and it will not get better and it will not go away as you get older.

        Some people attempt to kill the dream and it just turns into a sore. You would always have the pain of knowing that you have more potential and rather than fulfill your potential, you tried to kill it.

        So, damn that conference. It doesn't matter. Figure out what you want to do, make a solid plan, and then get to work on it. Don't let anyone or anything stand in your way.
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  • Profile picture of the author Jason Kanigan
    Originally Posted by a_dude View Post

    I've only high-school diploma and I've a job I'm not proud of, which has nothing to do with what I wanna do later in life.

    So what can I say in my elevator pitch? I have technical skills, but nothing to show, so do I have management and analytic skills, but once again - nothing to show. I've only worked "behind the curtains," unofficially, with no pay and no credit. I'm 20. I'm asking because I'm going to go to a conference next week, which is about IT and I'm aiming to talk to some business professionals. Basically, when they ask me what I do, I have to have something to say.

    Any questions/advice is welcome.
    Oh boy. Time to crank up your self-concept, my friend.

    All those things you said about yourself? "Nothing to show"? They don't know that. You're just some guy walking up to them. Never met you before. What you say is what you are.

    Now I am NOT saying to misrepresent yourself, or lie. Do NOT do that.

    However, you don't need to tell people every detail of what you've done or not done, either. They don't need to know about unpaid internships. You still did the work, didn't you?

    Dan said to say, "I work with business owners to do X" and he's on the right track. Fill in your 30 second commercial with things you've done and want to do.

    "I work with business owners who want to take advantage of today's technology, but don't want to spend the time learning about it themselves." There's a for-instance.

    What did you do "behind the curtains"?
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    • Profile picture of the author a_dude
      Originally Posted by Dan McCoy View Post

      This is why it is important to make a plan for yourself so you no longer have to suffer the indignities of corporate servitude.

      For those who are OK being an employee, it's not such a problem. But it seems you have the "bug" and it will not get better and it will not go away as you get older.

      Some people attempt to kill the dream and it just turns into a sore. You would always have the pain of knowing that you have more potential and rather than fulfill your potential, you tried to kill it.

      So, damn that conference. It doesn't matter. Figure out what you want to do, make a solid plan, and then get to work on it. Don't let anyone or anything stand in your way.
      I do. I even question my manager from time to time - seems like I've inspired some co-workers to do the same unintentionally. Just different things.

      That's a great attitude, and I already know what I want to do. Now, I just need a successful plan, which I'm trying to work out daily.

      Originally Posted by Jason Kanigan View Post

      What did you do "behind the curtains"?
      I appreciate the post, I feel like it doesn't need a reply - it was useful though.

      As for "behind the curtains," I've done some small-time management, programming, technical and software work of various sorts, writing fictional and journalistic works, given an interview for a now-closed community.

      Mostly I enjoy optimizing my workspace whenever I do something, that's the bad thing about it: I focus on optimization of the procedures rather than the work itself. For example, sometime I wanted to create a game, but after a few days of coding I went to optimization of my workspace (I don't like coding much, but I did learn it pretty good in a few days, C++ to those who are familiar. As far as I know, for most it takes a couple months). So basically, after I had a working basic prototype, I began to simply optimize the software I use, the coding technique, the syntax, the file structure, etc.. In the end I was able to manage to code much faster and the code was significantly more readable, but programming is not for me, I get bored fairly quickly of it. NOTE: That was just an example (a real one), I've ended up optimizing the resource-utilization of my servers, security of my servers (home-based, don't have anymore), startup times, etc., etc.. I just enjoy it and I'm good at it without much effort...
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