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Forum: Copywriting 29th March 2009, 05:46 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,112
Posted By tgrpublishing
Re: My sales letter for everybody but sells to nobody

He (and I) makes a valid point. You've spelt "frugal" wrong. It's a huge problem for anyone that knows how to spell it properly (most people, I would imagine), and anyone who knows what Google's...
Forum: Copywriting 26th March 2009, 03:37 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 928
Posted By tgrpublishing
Re: My first Sales Page ever: A trainwreck?

You've spelt "guaranteed" wrong. Run a spell checker over the whole page, and have a proofreader check for typos (for example "the" instead of "they").

"Download and transaction costs" is a very...
Forum: Copywriting 21st March 2009, 03:27 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 935
Posted By tgrpublishing
Re: Poll: Which Headline Do You Prefer

I don't like using your age in there. It might work for people who are 19, but anyone over 25 won't connect with it as well.

I like #4 the best, but it feels a bit cliche. "Never Before...
Forum: Copywriting 19th March 2009, 01:58 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 696
Posted By tgrpublishing
Anyone want a free sales letter?

I've been building my copywriting portfolio recently, and I need one more sample. So, if you need some sales copy, it's your lucky day :)

I will write for just about any niche, but NOT internet...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd February 2009, 07:55 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 826
Posted By tgrpublishing
Re: Sales Copy Review...Please

The prehead doesn't quite sit right for me. It states the obvious, and doesn't really lead into the main header. If you really want to keep it, I'd move it as a subhead, but still.. how about...
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