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Forum: Mind Warriors 18th November 2009, 08:05 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 2,499
Posted By Ann Writes
Re: I'm Struggling To Find My True Passion

Hi Wasim

What an honest and open post!

I can relate to your predicament. After all, we all know of people who seem to know from day one what they’re about while others struggle to...
Forum: Copywriting 17th November 2009, 12:27 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 911
Posted By Ann Writes
Re: Urgent! Squeeze page critique needed before I pay...

Here's how I see it:

I find the header image attractive but the more I look at it, the less believable it appears.

If you're going to use the word 'Finally', I'd put it in a line all by itself....
Forum: Copywriting 16th November 2009, 06:23 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 745
Posted By Ann Writes
Re: Sales Letter Review: Please check it out, Thanks!

Hi, here's what I think:

The first thing that struck me about your letter is that it lacks PACE! It's wayyyyyyyyyyyy too slow!

It rambles and in fonts and format that are really more suited to...
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