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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 15th January 2010, 11:42 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 564
Posted By ChrisJamesG
Re: Wordpress Translator???

I use this:

http://www.nothing2hide.net/wp-plugins/wordpress-global-translator-plugin/

as a translator tool. Not sure about the translator form though.

Hope this helps.

Cheers,
Chris
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 7th December 2009, 10:58 PM
Replies: 1,534
Views: 165,886
Posted By AP
Re: Offline Marketers: What services are you offering for monthly fees?

I ONLY work with HIGH margin businesses. High margin businesses are ideal for the offline world.

One of my clients is a Cosmetic Surgeon. I advertise for Boob jobs, $4,000 per boob. Doctors...
Forum: Copywriting 25th August 2009, 10:47 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 772
Posted By Nick Brighton
Re: Attn. Copywriting Gods..May I have a Sales Letter Critique, please?

My sentiments entirely. The one thing people jump down to is the price and the PSs. first. Then they scan the page to see if it looks "fun" to read, then finally they get around to reading your copy....
Forum: Copywriting 25th August 2009, 06:05 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 772
Posted By Kevin-VirtualProfitCenter
Re: Attn. Copywriting Gods..May I have a Sales Letter Critique, please?

Before I comment, can you reply and tell us what your goal is--are you trying to get 5 payments of $97 or $500 or what? Once we have an idea of the goal it's easier to get an idea of whether or not...
Forum: Copywriting 25th August 2009, 12:37 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 772
Posted By maximus242
Re: Attn. Copywriting Gods..May I have a Sales Letter Critique, please?

Sentences in your body copy are too long and makes it hard to read. Put your testimonials up a lot higher in the copy, make them more visible. Spread them out more. Put your strongest one at the very...
Forum: Copywriting 25th August 2009, 12:27 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 772
Posted By CDarklock
Re: Attn. Copywriting Gods..May I have a Sales Letter Critique, please?

Headline is weak. One of the most common problems I see. Headlines are hard... I didn't really appreciate how hard until I started trying to write them. I would never call myself "good" at headlines...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 24th August 2009, 09:00 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 739
Posted By Floyd Fisher
Re: Destroy my Landing Page!!!

There is a script sold by John Delavera called 'special offer manager' that does that automatically for you. I'm using it, and it's great.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 24th August 2009, 08:21 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 739
Posted By Matthew Iannotti
Re: Destroy my Landing Page!!!

Your P.S's are very weak.......

Regardless of what others say about the amount you have left..Sneaky or not...... I'm all for it and like that idea.....
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 24th August 2009, 07:59 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 739
Posted By Amy Carczak
Re: Destroy my Landing Page!!!

I'm not really an expert but it always seems to me that when someone is portraying themselves as an "expert" and when the amount of money being discussed is in the thousands ...shouldn't that expert...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 24th August 2009, 07:23 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 739
Posted By Chris Thompson
Re: Destroy my Landing Page!!!

The site is really good looking. Beautiful header. Nice use of video. Definitely get a spelling and grammar whiz to go over it.

What theme are you using in wordpress? Beautifully done.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 24th August 2009, 04:06 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 739
Posted By Jillian Slack
Re: Destroy my Landing Page!!!

Change "who's" to "whose."

Who's = who is

So you are saying "...planner who is goal in life..."
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 24th August 2009, 01:17 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 739
Posted By Chris Keith
Re: Destroy my Landing Page!!!

Just out of curiosity, whats your model?

Are you charging the low initial fee + giving away the DVD in order to offer upsells or a continuity of some sort?

Overall the design of the site is...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 24th August 2009, 12:44 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 739
Posted By BigRedNotebook
Re: Destroy my Landing Page!!!

One other thing... Only 27 DVDs left?

Based on a quick look at the page's source code, that's hard-coded into the text. So, either you're manually updating that number and re-uploading the page...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 24th August 2009, 11:22 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 739
Posted By waken
Re: Destroy my Landing Page!!!

When people asking for review on their sales page, it's more than often that there are indeed a lot of rooms for improvement.. but yours...

It could be the best candidates but nothing can be more...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 24th August 2009, 11:20 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 739
Posted By TyBrown
Re: Destroy my Landing Page!!!

There were a couple spelling and grammatical errors; stuff like simester, buddies (buddy's), Deserve (should be lower case), etc.
There were a few other errors and missing commas. You may want to...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 24th August 2009, 11:11 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 739
Posted By Ross Bowring
Re: Destroy my Landing Page!!!

Only got a minute but two things...

One. This paragraph needs to be broken down into smaller paragraphs. It's way too intimidating.

Than one day I had a friend ask me why his buddies son had...
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