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Forum: Copywriting 9th May 2013, 06:34 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,643
Posted By shawnlebrun
Re: Please give me feedback on my fitness sales page

Matt,

the male version is just as bad. the headline is confusing as heck.

But truthfully... asking here on the Forum what you should do may not be the best place... and I only say that because...
Forum: Copywriting 9th May 2013, 06:28 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,643
Posted By Mark Pescetti
Re: Please give me feedback on my fitness sales page

It's good information, but there's nothing groundbreaking about it.

I started doing Plyometrics when I was 14 or 15.

If you're appealing to anyone with a fitness background, you'll just get a...
Forum: Copywriting 9th May 2013, 05:39 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,643
Posted By shawnlebrun
Re: Please give me feedback on my fitness sales page

Matt,

want to learn what resonates with the female weight loss market?

It's not being clever. They're not in the mindset for clever.

When many of them feel down and depressed about their...
Forum: Copywriting 9th May 2013, 05:35 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,643
Posted By BurtL
Re: Please give me feedback on my fitness sales page

By posting on here you're going to get a lot of "opinions" on how to make it better.

You will see a common theme that people are suggesting that's what you need to work on, ie your USP. Then...
Forum: Copywriting 9th May 2013, 01:29 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,643
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Please give me feedback on my fitness sales page

Bingo. Your headline is amusing, sure, but I didn't want to read anything beyond it. Why? Because there were no benefits promised. I didn't even see anything that aroused my curiosity.

Also, who...
Forum: Copywriting 9th May 2013, 01:07 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,643
Posted By Mark Pescetti
Re: Please give me feedback on my fitness sales page

Let me ask you a question Matt:

Are you determined to do this all on your own?

You're not on the right track yet.

You're not hitting the emotions that will grab a woman's attention.
...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 2nd May 2013, 08:05 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 392
Posted By Mark Pescetti
Re: Question about split testing sales pages

Another thought:

The cornerstone of your brand is about healing the metabolism.

You did a good job explaining how eating more consistently helps heal the metabolism and prevents the body from...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 2nd May 2013, 07:53 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 392
Posted By Mark Pescetti
Re: Question about split testing sales pages

Okay...

Let me back up a second.

There are brands that transcend gender. P90X is certainly a solid example of how branding can reach men and women equally.

And your philosophy definitely has...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 2nd May 2013, 07:06 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 392
Posted By Mark Pescetti
Re: Question about split testing sales pages

First of all...

Marketing and copy that sells is totally dependent upon the traffic you're driving.

The advice you received in the copywriting forum is spot on; you need a USP BEFORE you'll...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd May 2013, 11:34 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,643
Posted By Enfusia
Re: Please give me feedback on my fitness sales page

Hey Matt,

Here's what I see that's just above the fold, that's all I have time for at the moment.

1. Your Pre headline. You've limited your customers to 30 and 40 year olds. The 50 year + has...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd May 2013, 10:14 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,643
Posted By Raydal
Re: Please give me feedback on my fitness sales page

I truly sympathize with you because I agree with your
gernarla analysis with the weight loss market. But at
the same time you have to work with people where
they are. The gimmicks work and that's...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd May 2013, 03:08 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,643
Posted By MIB Mastermind
Re: Please give me feedback on my fitness sales page

The headline is weak.

There's no hook to draw me in to the body copy.

You really need to nail down a USP and better define your target market. It's a whole lot
easier to talk to one group of...
Forum: Copywriting 1st May 2013, 03:42 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,643
Posted By Loren Woirhaye
Re: Please give me feedback on my fitness sales page

What if you targeted couples who want to lose
weight together?
Forum: Copywriting 1st May 2013, 11:32 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,643
Posted By maximus242
Re: Please give me feedback on my fitness sales page

You know whats the problem with this letter? Boring. B-O-R-I-N-G Boring.

P.S. Headline = Sucks
Forum: Copywriting 1st May 2013, 11:28 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,643
Posted By shawnlebrun
Re: Please give me feedback on my fitness sales page

One other thing Matt, and it's a biggy.

There's nothing, zip, zilch... that's in your letter that I haven't
seen or read a thousand times before.

Why YOU and not Mike Geary or Tom Venuto or...
Forum: Copywriting 1st May 2013, 11:07 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,643
Posted By shawnlebrun
Re: Please give me feedback on my fitness sales page

Matt, as someone who has sold millions of dollars worth of products and services in this niche... I've found it pretty tough to speak to the wants/needs of both men and women on the same page.
...
Forum: Copywriting 1st May 2013, 03:35 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,643
Posted By Monja
Re: Please give me feedback on my fitness sales page

Personally, I love the examples. What I usually hate about sales pages (not just yours) is that they are super long. Who reads that? Who wants to read the same over and over again (haven't ready...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 12th April 2013, 01:45 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,818
Posted By CyberAlien
Re: Common fiverr scam?

If Fiverr cancels and refunds money when they suspend a users account then doing that would be pretty easy. They could order 100 of your gig all on the same day. Then after you deliver the work it...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 12th April 2013, 01:37 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,818
Posted By butterballs8
Re: Common fiverr scam?

I have the same issue with a customer. I delivered exactly what he ordered. He then made the excuse of not having received any of my emails. Basically, playing dumb and he then contacted Paypal and...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 12th April 2013, 01:35 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,818
Posted By rosetrees
Re: Common fiverr scam?

What kind of gig were you offering? I ask because if it was writing gig, I would quickly set up a site and add all the unpaid for articles. Then, if the non-paying client tries to use them elsewhere...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 12th April 2013, 01:29 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,818
Posted By pingsters
Re: Common fiverr scam?

Sorry to hear that. There is no way Fiverr will pay you after suspending the employer. It happens sometimes. I, am a worker at Odesk and it happened to me twice. The employer asked me to start the...
Forum: Programming 10th April 2013, 10:10 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 379
Posted By KingRoyal
Re: download protection scripts

Open source, I have no idea but I have had a lot of success with a script called linklock, however I Forget how much it cost, cheap i believe
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 1st November 2012, 08:55 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 456
Posted By Joe Crosbie
Re: Review my partial sales video

Hi Matt,

Really good quality video here, normally I would say that a video this long could be classed as risky. Although you have filmed in a very clever way and it is like watching a TV...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 1st November 2012, 08:52 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 456
Posted By talfighel
Re: Review my partial sales video

Video looks good. You did a nice job. You should add teaser clips.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 1st November 2012, 08:51 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 456
Posted By Abul-Hussain
Re: Review my partial sales video

Great video Matt, I know somebody in the UK that charges £10,000 per client for EXACTLY the same service you are providing. He get's away with charging that much, purely based on how he's positioned...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 1st November 2012, 08:35 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 456
Posted By JeremiahSay
Re: Review my partial sales video

Hi Matt,

It looks great to me. High quality video. Clear and loud enough voice. Good luck with your launch:)
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 1st November 2012, 08:33 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 456
Posted By vip-ip
Re: Review my partial sales video

Why are other videos 20-30 minutes long? My gut tells me, it's because the audience has the attention span... that being said, this video looks fantastic by what I've seen so far.

Regards,
vip-ip...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th July 2012, 12:29 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 444
Posted By Randall Magwood
Re: Please review my video squeeze page.

The layout is nice. The video is cool. I would have the video set to "auto-start" as soon as someone visits your page.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th July 2012, 10:30 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 444
Posted By Christophe Young
Re: Please review my video squeeze page.

I like the design as well and also love things simple. I think the video is a bit too short and you should add more compelling reasons for people to give their email.

For instance:

Just enter...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th July 2012, 09:27 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 444
Posted By Mark Gray
Re: Please review my video squeeze page.

Yup looks good, here are some thoughts:

Location excellent, well presented info also

You missed a word out "The Fitness Industry is Full Conflicting Information" should be:

"The Fitness...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th July 2012, 09:06 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 444
Posted By Surminga
Re: Please review my video squeeze page.

Yea, straightforward and not really any links or options to do anything other than watch your video or subscribe to you. Keep it simple and don't give to many options to the users
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th July 2012, 09:06 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 444
Posted By RedJohn473
Re: Please review my video squeeze page.

Yeah it looks great my eyes looked straight at the video then the call to action

good luck!
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th July 2012, 08:17 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 444
Posted By kojakeugenio
Re: Please review my video squeeze page.

Im not an expert in this field but I think your layout is fine and straightforward.
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