How's my squeeze page?

by TonyAG
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Before I start investing my low amount of money on solo ads I want to make sure my squeeze page converts well.

Warriors, I humbly ask for your opinion.

I need to know if the headlines work.

If the video catches your attention.

If there are any problems when viewing the squeeze page.

And so on.

You can view the squeeze page here.


I'll appreciate all the critique, advice, and suggestions I receive.
#page #squeeze
  • Profile picture of the author Warrior X
    Should be fine, it's not really that hard to get someone to trade their email for a freebie- pretty low risk transaction.

    It's obviously a very polished video which helps (boosts the trust factor). You do the page yourself?

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  • Profile picture of the author lotsofsnow
    That is going to be a very expensive squeeze page.

    Way too confusing.

    If you want a high conversion rate: strip it down. Take out all the distractions.
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  • Profile picture of the author Justin Michie
    You've got way too much going on... too many colors and graphics and the opt-in form is not easy to see. I'd make it way simplier on a plain white background and have no more text than a headline and sub-healine and your opt-in form and privacy statment.
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    • Profile picture of the author TonyAG
      So there's too much to look at really? Darn.

      I actually bought a WSO a week ago that said this kind of design can get a near 100% opt in rate.

      Would just editing the headlines work? I can't really afford more time to waste right now.
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