Would this page work good for SEO?

I think it would make a good landing page. Who doesn't like discounts? With 30 percent off they would sure check around if they were interested.

I think it is a good landing page.

Nice site, is that built on a custom platform?

In regards to your question, I like the landing page, however, I would recommend adding a bit of content if possible, about the product in question. At least a paragraph or two using the keyword you are targeting. That would make it better for Google as it would give them so related text to feed on.

I "think" patrich is suggesting have a blurb of text about the product itself (so SEO-wise, Google tags it as relevant to whichever product has the keyword; but that doesn't necessarily make it consistent since demand might change, but for now that should do it). Reviews don't hurt either though.

The page looks good, but I have a few comments. The page targets Samsung LED, LCD, Plasma, and 3d TV's. Yet, it includes various accessories. If I was a visitor who searched the term Samsung LED and arrived at a page with speakers, mounts, and keyboards on the page, I might turn around and find another page. I would remove the accessories and include them on their own page.

Also, you are targeting several keywords all on one page, i.e., Samsung LED, Samsung LCD, Samsung Plasma, and Samsung 3d TV. This will make it more challenging to optimize for each keyword. If there are enough products under each category, I would make pages directed to each keyword.

Also, consider the competition for each keyword that you are targeting. The keyword Samsung LCD has a difficulty rating of 58% according to SEOmoz (3600 local searches). Samsung Plasma is 53% with 4,400 local searches. Are these numbers you are comfortable tackling?

The phrase Samsung LED, LCD, Plasma, and 3d TV's gets zero searches a month. However, it is a keyword rich title and will help some in ranking some of the terms in the title.

That's a cool strategy.This kinds of ideas are effective.

It is awesome you are getting traffic. Commissions on these big tickets items must be pretty nice :-) Has the site made any sales yet?

Definitely add more content Google like sites with a lot of content on pages and if you want to rank for long tail keywords you need a lot of content at least 600 - 1000 per page.

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As already stated above, you do need to add content. look for around a 1000 words below the fold. This will give the old googlebot somthing to get its teeth into.Look for a keyword density around 2%.

Just write about the differerences between Led and Plasma Tvs, pros and cons etc. Why should i buy a samsung and not another make. Tell me about 3d tvS ETC.

You don't have to add a very long content for that page. It almost meet the users' needs when it comes to TVs.

I suggest to make a little bit description for each of the TV. Let's say, you will specified some features of each units such as it's specs, the quality of the color, durability etc. That would help.

I don't suggest putting a long content because your customers will not waste their time in reading long contents. Making a description of each product will not take 500 words or above. Just provide what users are looking for when it comes to TVs. Make a straight stab with the products and make your customer satisfied.