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Review my site!

by GFI
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I have a site regarding Essay Writing which I share with you for comment. I want to know that how my site is looking or any problem which can’t attract visitors.
Here is my site College Level Essay Writing . I am waiting your replies.

Regards,
#review #site
  • Profile picture of the author Greedy
    Your site writes papers for college kids?

    Your blog could use some work. Content-wise and design-wise

    You company name in the upper left corner looks bland.
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  • Profile picture of the author ldiaz117
    Blog is too plain. Site looks ok...
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  • Profile picture of the author Yaduvanshi
    Banned
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    • Profile picture of the author Nicky Papers
      Originally Posted by Bestseller91 View Post

      This is not a "Review my site" section damn it.
      Have some minds people.
      Seriously? You should be grateful that people are taking time out of their day to look at your site. More importantly, everything they said is true!

      You're URL structures need a lot of work. That's the first thing that pops out as far as things that would inhibit your site from ranking.

      Example: Term Paper Writing Services UK | Business Essay Writing

      Clean that mess up!
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  • Profile picture of the author nekwf
    Hmm, your homepage looks disjointed. Have to work on how you flow with the image links on the right. They all look like they don't belong there.
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  • Profile picture of the author Elle Davies
    I'm going to point out the obvious problem - you're not a native English speaker are you?

    The content on the site is all over the place grammatically speaking...You'll need to get this proofread so people will take the business seriously.

    And are you providing the service yourself or do you have a team of writers? You'll need to hire native English writers or get one to proofread each document to guarantee the quality....
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  • Profile picture of the author anne785
    Your site contains wage contents which would not grasp the customers attention. Then from SEO point of view you have to improve the on page optimization of the site such as urls, metatags etc.
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  • Profile picture of the author DZainein
    I like it
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  • Profile picture of the author interserverx
    You are choosing simple theme. It looks like pretty
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  • Profile picture of the author timothyalex
    Hey GFI,
    Your website looks simple and neat. One thing i would like to point out is "Font Color". It would be better if you can change the font color of the text to black so that it will be more readable. Also keep changing the content as your website mainly focuses on content writing.
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  • Profile picture of the author Karen Barr
    You have a lot of grammatical errors which is going to put off anybody from buying writing services.

    Also, you have failed to publish your registered business address, which is a legal requirement for business in the UK that operate online.
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  • Profile picture of the author MatthewWoodward
    All of the important content is below the fold
    There is no clear call to action
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