Landing Page - what do you think?

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What do you guys think on my landing page to promote my book cover design services?

I plan to use this one with adwords...

any suggestion or feedback is much appreciated!

hxxp://www.fausgaitan.com/book-cover-design
#landing #page
  • Profile picture of the author olelar
    Hi,

    Here is a little bit of feedback.
    (1) The top text is a little hard to read (its too small for me)
    (2) the little description that shows up when I hold my mouse over one of the covers say "title" on all of them. Consider changing that?
    (3) Add a favicon to the site. Makes it look more professional.

    Other than that I think the design looks great. The only other thing I can imagine is that your quality score might be a little low because of lack of text.

    Hope that helps.
    Ole.
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    • Profile picture of the author FostinWD
      Originally Posted by olelar View Post

      Hi,

      Here is a little bit of feedback.
      (1) The top text is a little hard to read (its too small for me)
      (2) the little description that shows up when I hold my mouse over one of the covers say "title" on all of them. Consider changing that?
      (3) Add a favicon to the site. Makes it look more professional.

      Other than that I think the design looks great. The only other thing I can imagine is that your quality score might be a little low because of lack of text.

      Hope that helps.
      Ole.
      Thank you very much for taking the time and reply I appreciate it!!!
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  • Profile picture of the author clickpencil
    Its just ok according to me.
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