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Web site landing page comments wanted

by heinzTheBarron
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Hi, I would like some feedback on my landing page or home page for my web site I built.

I post ads in the service section of craig's list for my small biz and that posting mentions my web site. It appears most people check it out. The current goal of the web page is simply to get them to call me for repair service's for sprinkler systems.

It appears the page looks good on PC's, ipad's and phones. But that's only my opinion. Any feedback is appreciated.

Thank you.

Whoops

www.sprinklerwiz.com



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  • Profile picture of the author andrewjorgenson
    If you want feedback please provide us with a link.
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  • Profile picture of the author counzila
    Note; you said ur site is look good in other devices too i suggest if you know or not try Google insight page quality too i think you will find ur site have Hd quality pics that with presentation home page it make site render slow on other devices so need fix them 1st hope this tip help some how!!
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    • Profile picture of the author heinzTheBarron
      Originally Posted by counzila View Post

      Note; you said ur site is look good in other devices too i suggest if you know or not try Google insight page quality too i think you will find ur site have Hd quality pics that with presentation home page it make site render slow on other devices so need fix them 1st hope this tip help some how!!

      Thanks, will do.
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  • Profile picture of the author Member8200
    - Maybe you can work more with the background color, it kinda blends on the banner color.
    - More information about your services.

    Hope this helps. Good-luck
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  • Profile picture of the author webelement
    It looks simple and I have few comments:
    1. You can put logo or emblem beside "Sprinkler Wiz:.
    2. Maybe a gradient or pattern can make the background more appealing.
    3. You can put a border on your slider to make it more complicated.
    Thanks and goodluck!
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    • Profile picture of the author JakeM1
      Very nice imagery!

      Good to see how quickly you can absorb all the information on the page and great how the phone number is prominently displayed.

      Only question I have it how you're going to market this page? The only annoying thing about minimal pages, whilst they can look amazing, it's harder to rank them on Google due to the low amount of content on the page. If you're using Google Local, Ads or even social media to drive traffic to this page, then it's perfect. It just might be a bit hard to get people to find the website when performing a search.

      I personally prefer a minimal site and being creative with the marketing, rather than an essay of a page which no-one is going to read, but ranks well on Google. You just need to have the traffic element thought out though.
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      • Profile picture of the author heinzTheBarron
        Originally Posted by JakeM1 View Post

        Very nice imagery!

        Good to see how quickly you can absorb all the information on the page and great how the phone number is prominently displayed.

        Only question I have it how you're going to market this page? The only annoying thing about minimal pages, whilst they can look amazing, it's harder to rank them on Google due to the low amount of content on the page. If you're using Google Local, Ads or even social media to drive traffic to this page, then it's perfect. It just might be a bit hard to get people to find the website when performing a search.

        I personally prefer a minimal site and being creative with the marketing, rather than an essay of a page which no-one is going to read, but ranks well on Google. You just need to have the traffic element thought out though.
        Yes, when you look at this index.html from a smart phone the user can understand what service I provide and what my phone number is without any effort at all. No button pushing required. I like that.

        Yes I'm gonna add more pages today.
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  • Profile picture of the author usemyteam
    Website looks good and simple but I think it needs more functionality for a landing page. Maybe an opt-in or some links in order to get to your main page.
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  • Profile picture of the author heinzTheBarron
    My goals and purpose of the site are the following.

    1) My Graigslist service ad contains the web site address so visitors can learn about my biz and services.

    2) I have long term seo goals for the site.

    3) I have PPC goals for the site.

    4) Immediate goals are to add pages that are informative and useful for homeowners in regards to sprinkler system issues.

    Thanks for all the feedback folks.
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  • Profile picture of the author heinzTheBarron
    I have made changes many have suggested.

    Added (5) pages

    Contact
    Rates
    Sprinklers 101
    Videos
    Digging

    My goals and purpose of the site are the following.

    1) My Graigslist service ad contains the web site address so visitors can learn about my biz and services, so often they end up at the site.

    2) I have long term seo goals for the site.

    3) I have PPC goals for the site.

    Thanks for all the feedback folks.
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