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Hello All, I have a service business creating logos. I just built the website and plan to invest in a marketing campaign on FB. Before I start my campaign I wanted to see what others thought, in their previous experience about my business page and if my site has potential to convert sales.

My website is Ascend GFX

Thanks!
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  • Profile picture of the author Nico Puegher
    The site isn't bad, I would add your best project on the home at the top with the "Ascend GFX Affordable and Effective logo designs starting at $15".
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  • Profile picture of the author gingerninjas
    Here’s my feedback.

    - More examples of logos would be great.

    - Don’t use a Gmail email - use your company info@ email if you can. To me gmail looks a bit amateurish

    - There is no real tag line - you might want to add - ‘Affordable Logos For All Business’ or something to that effect - as right now it doesn’t actually say what you do.

    - It just doesn’t really seem personal enough, have you considered adding in some bios of your team to give it a little more personality and warmth.

    - About us - say who you actually are - right now it is all a little vague.

    - Logo on home page seems a little small and it looks blurry

    - The CTA on the home page is really faint and I can barely read it.

    - The popup on the home page is kind of annoying and your logos are so cheap, I am not sure you need an offer.

    Overall it looks good but it is a little bare.

    All the best.
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  • Profile picture of the author Ronald Ramsay
    Here are a few thoughts.

    I would avoid the white text on white background. Try adding a nice full screen image or a video to grab your visitor's attention. Maybe a video of a logo being created.

    Add some color to the site to make it pop.

    Pay attention to typography. Add some character to the site with better fonts.

    I would remove recent work from the footer, add social buttons and a field to collect email addresses . (sign up for newsletter, tips and advice for creating memorable logos)

    Add a blog to share cool information about logos (i.e. the history of iconic logos, corporate logo fails etc.)

    Avoid the gmail and add stronger call to action buttons.
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  • Profile picture of the author ohnoeedidntt
    Thanks for the feedback all. All excellent suggestions. I just launched an ad campaign with FB so I'm hoping for the best.
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  • Profile picture of the author Diskretni
    The site isn't bad at all,it is pretty decent,for it to be really good you shouldn't focus on only one thing you should focus on everything a little bit.
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  • Profile picture of the author glasslogos
    I would have revamped the site before launching the FB add... It's not ready. I agree with all the feedback below You want your site to look like this Freelance Graphic Designer - Logo Design & Branding Belfast
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  • Originally Posted by ohnoeedidntt View Post

    Hello All, I have a service business creating logos. I just built the website and plan to invest in a marketing campaign on FB. Before I start my campaign I wanted to see what others thought, in their previous experience about my business page and if my site has potential to convert sales.

    My website is Ascend GFX

    Thanks!
    Hello,

    I have taken a deep review at your site and here are my inputs:

    Home Page:

    1. I have doubt that this site will be successful, I have following point points to prove it:

    a. Its logo design company/website but there is no sample of client choose his design.
    b. There is no basic format.
    c. After selecting its price category visitor will be redirected to checkout page. No customer will pay without seeing his design preview.

    2. Website layout and design is simple and fine. Need to improve home feature image/text. Make it more attractive.
    3. Our work light box I working properly.
    4. Hyperlink of "Choose your package","Submit Order","This is our part" are not specified. Add there hyperlink to pricing section/page.
    5. "Contact Us" and "Recent Work" are in same row. Keep "Contact Us" in footer section below "Recent Work".

    About Us Page:

    1. This page is fine just justify the paragraph and put meaningful and relate image.

    Pricing Page:
    1. There is unknown text line just below "Standard Design" column's "Get Started" button.

    FAQ:
    1. Same questions have been displayed at pricing page. Decide to use it at anyone page.

    Contact Us Page:

    1. Contact Form 7 plugging is working properly on this page. To make it effective add google map to show your office location worldwide.

    Note: There is a technical error in cart. It store total price for such a long time even after close browser and open it again. It show previous total price.

    It may give following errors:

    a. If a new customer will visit to website, he will get product added in cart. If visitor is not aware he will do payment of earlier added product too.
    b. If visitor is aware, he will have to remove earlier added product from cart, then he can add his new order in cart.

    Important Note for this website developer: If you want to store total amount, then store it for a particular visitor. Provide login option, after login store it in visitor session. So that cart will be empty after browser close or logout.
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  • Profile picture of the author ohnoeedidntt
    Originally Posted by sumit@247easysupport View Post

    Hello,

    I have taken a deep review at your site and here are my inputs:

    Home Page:

    1. I have doubt that this site will be successful, I have following point points to prove it:

    a. Its logo design company/website but there is no sample of client choose his design.
    b. There is no basic format.
    c. After selecting its price category visitor will be redirected to checkout page. No customer will pay without seeing his design preview.

    2. Website layout and design is simple and fine. Need to improve home feature image/text. Make it more attractive.
    3. Our work light box I working properly.
    4. Hyperlink of "Choose your package","Submit Order","This is our part" are not specified. Add there hyperlink to pricing section/page.
    5. "Contact Us" and "Recent Work" are in same row. Keep "Contact Us" in footer section below "Recent Work".

    About Us Page:

    1. This page is fine just justify the paragraph and put meaningful and relate image.

    Pricing Page:
    1. There is unknown text line just below "Standard Design" column's "Get Started" button.

    FAQ:
    1. Same questions have been displayed at pricing page. Decide to use it at anyone page.

    Contact Us Page:

    1. Contact Form 7 plugging is working properly on this page. To make it effective add google map to show your office location worldwide.

    Note: There is a technical error in cart. It store total price for such a long time even after close browser and open it again. It show previous total price.

    It may give following errors:

    a. If a new customer will visit to website, he will get product added in cart. If visitor is not aware he will do payment of earlier added product too.
    b. If visitor is aware, he will have to remove earlier added product from cart, then he can add his new order in cart.

    Important Note for this website developer: If you want to store total amount, then store it for a particular visitor. Provide login option, after login store it in visitor session. So that cart will be empty after browser close or logout.
    I appreciate the thorough review. I'm confused about a couple things you mentioned though.

    1. I have doubt that this site will be successful, I have following point points to prove it:

    a. Its logo design company/website but there is no sample of client choose his design.
    b. There is no basic format.
    c. After selecting its price category visitor will be redirected to checkout page. No customer will pay without seeing his design preview.
    a. during check out I provide an option for the client to upload samples of the style of logo that they like.
    b. what do you mean by basic format? format of what? The design?
    c. I see what your saying but I offer 100% money back guarantee. From my point of view, whats to stop customers from just taking my design and not paying?

    Note: There is a technical error in cart. It store total price for such a long time even after close browser and open it again. It show previous total price.
    That's a convenient feature for the customer to have their shopping cart saved. I don't agree with you on that point.

    Other than that, you just told me that the reason I'm not going to be successful is because there's no basic format and I'm protecting myself from customers who do not pay after delivery.
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  • Profile picture of the author DenniseTan
    IMO, the site looks clean and straightforward. I just think you should make your own logo a bit more appealing and also make it a bit larger. I think you should also align your footer so that it won't look off on the bottom part of your page. Add an "S" on "Our Work". Add more logo samples as well.
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  • Profile picture of the author SEO Pearl
    The site theme looks simple and good!
    Add your social icons on the website.
    If your site is copyrighted then add your copyrights in the bottom of your website.
    Make a strong connection to your website with your social accounts to get the good reach of your site.
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  • Profile picture of the author StSignal
    I like the site,I wouldn't change a thing,it is simple and yet it is very smooth and nice.
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