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NoAdware is an easy to use program, it's clear and simple to do anything you want, even the most computer illiterate will find it simple to start a scan or set up spyware protection for their computer.

The scan speed is outstanding, for a full scan of your computer it takes less than twenty minutes, when the average scan time in spyware removal tools ranges from one to two hours.

The detection rate is very high; whilst testing the product I found a deeply em?bedded registry virus that I didn't even know about, this proves that NoAdware detects spyware that other software was unable to.

Removing any malicious spyware is made extremely easy, once a scan is over you simply click 'yes' when asked if you want to remove any infected files and then it's completely done, very simple and no complications at all.

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Removing any malicious spyware is made extremely easy. Once a scan is over it will ask if you want to remove any infected files; simply click 'yes' and then it's completely done, very simple and with no complications at all.

Another simple but great feature of NoAdware is that it doesn't just detect outright malicious files, it also detects files that are out of place, and tells you whether they are harmful or not, so you can always detect a rogue file in the most unlikely places.

Unlike most antispyware softare, NoAdware isn't just limited to a removal tool, it also includes a range of blockers and virus prevention software.

As you can see in the screen shot, there is the main shield and then an additional shield for ActiveX ran programs. You can also adjust settings of scans once you're confident with the existing settings.

Overall, NoAdware v5.0 is a brilliant spyware removal program. Instictively when reviewing any program, I always try extremely hard to find even the slightest negative, but I honestly couldn't find a single fault.

Thank you so much. Just what I wanted.

What about the actual review though? Is it good enough? Also the webpage generally, any conversion tips at all?

Hi, in a way im surprised i'm saying this but i think you need o alter the wording of the review so it has more panache- a bit more glitzy as it were.

I think the wording needs to be more assertive, take more authority and use less 'it's' and 'the's'- in other words make it more snappy.

let nme know what yo think of my advice as it may also help my own design

Thanks and good luck

Neil

Also, what keywords are you doing after? Anti spyware is searched ~823,000 times per month, it'll be much harder to rank on then say "anti spyware software" which is only 40,000 times per month.

Also, google is seeing you as chasing down "spyware removal", which is fine and dandy (searched ~301,000 times/month, still a lot IMO)... but you seem to be going after spyware removal on some of your other pages as well? You shouldn't be keyword cannibalizing (GO GO ART OF SEO!!!). You're making the big G pick which of your pages to use for the same keyword.... so it seems anyways.

Again, sorry, my views are more SEO related than true "website design". As far as the design I don't see any big issues jumping out at me. Maybe go into a little of what's actually bad about it? I know personally I like to read that, I want an HONEST review, not somebody talking something up to try to sell it.