Does this website look interesting to you?

31 replies
  • WEB DESIGN
  • |
Does this website look interesting to you?

Freebies4Real.com - Improve Your Monthly Income From Home!

Does it peak your interest? If not then why? It peaks my interest but does it peak yours? :rolleyes:
#interesting #website
  • Profile picture of the author seobirk
    I guess it works for the target audience.

    Though some improvements to be made.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4517090].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author alexcercel
    Sorry but not really... There's too much clutter on the slides on the top and too much stuff going on overall. I would give it 6 out of 10.
    Signature
    -----------------------------------------------------------------
    They Say The Dark Angel Wears Prada...
    CB Best Sellers Wear BlingCovers'
    Minisite Design
    -----------------------------------------------------------------
    Professional Web Banners - Amazing Prices!
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4517597].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author lovenot
    The banners don't look good. They look like scams to me. Maybe you should make the white borders rounded and 3D-like, and don't use cartoons unless it matches your site.

    Also, ratings upwards of 5 are silly.

    The only rating anyone should give is. Bad, Moderately Decent, Decent, Moderately Good and Good and my rating is that it looks Moderately Decent.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4517874].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author Izzy9
    I think there's just too much going on. I would prefer it to be a lot simpler and I also don't dig the cartoon character. It seems out of place. But good job so far. With a few adjustments, this will look great.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4518156].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author jaimegm
      I think that you should ad a video, there are several ways to do it, and show exactly what you are offering in your initial title
      Signature

      Free course about free from Youtube Twitter or Email at www.realistic100aday.com

      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4519108].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author Matt Braun
    I agree with the above posters but the good thing is that all you have to do is slow your roll a little bit now and you should be good. It's better than being to plain/boring,
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4523027].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author Karen Barr
    The slider changes too quickly to read all the text that's in there. I would probably take it out of the slider and put it front and center so it's all above the fold. Your login options down below don't need to be above the fold - by that time people are already members, so I would put that right at the bottom.

    I like the fact that you've said "You won't get rich" - you definitely get points with me for being honest. Your free sign-up offer should also pull in a lot of people, I'd have thought.

    I definitely think a video would help make people's minds up - the fact that you don't reveal exactly how people make their money can come off a bit scammy. If you could explain a bit more clearly in a video I think that would help. For example if its dropshipping, just briefly say that the method involves reselling physical products at a good margin. You could also spend time talking about exactly what the benefits of having a membership are once the initial "learning" period is done.

    Hope this helps. Oh and lose the weird little cartoon tribesman with a spear?!
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4525864].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author Deadly Designs
      I have added a video to the join page, let me know what you think and cartoon character is being killed as we speak lol!

      Originally Posted by Karen Barr View Post

      The slider changes too quickly to read all the text that's in there. I would probably take it out of the slider and put it front and center so it's all above the fold. Your login options down below don't need to be above the fold - by that time people are already members, so I would put that right at the bottom.

      I like the fact that you've said "You won't get rich" - you definitely get points with me for being honest. Your free sign-up offer should also pull in a lot of people, I'd have thought.

      I definitely think a video would help make people's minds up - the fact that you don't reveal exactly how people make their money can come off a bit scammy. If you could explain a bit more clearly in a video I think that would help. For example if its dropshipping, just briefly say that the method involves reselling physical products at a good margin. You could also spend time talking about exactly what the benefits of having a membership are once the initial "learning" period is done.

      Hope this helps. Oh and lose the weird little cartoon tribesman with a spear?!
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4532829].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author billythekid
    your testimonial dates need changing looks all too scrambled together.
    Signature
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4526097].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author Deadly Designs
    lol thanks and I will remove the cartoon character and make slide images better. And re-arrange things and come back for another review and I will decide on making a video.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4530951].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author martinezfirebrid
    Looks interesting, I enjoyed looking at your website, Is this yours or just showing us?
    _______

    Angel @ Utah Web Design
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4531892].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author gaffg
    with the name freebies in the title I would assume this site is about free stuff but the first thing visible is an ad to improve your monthly income.

    Is there any reason you are using this domain with freebies in it?
    Signature
    http://gaffg.com - Gambling affiliate programs
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4532285].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author Deadly Designs
    i own the site and users will understand freebies when they sign-up and if you look at the join page then it has a few things you can get free on their also and joining is free but there is more...alot more when the user joins
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4532320].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author kashif nazeer
    are you talking about the design? it looks like a template work rather than a custom design. slider is tatic
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4532914].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author LeviiStar
      From first glance, within 10 seconds, I can't work out what the site is even about. And what I've found is that the impression the user gets within the first 10 seconds of landing on a page ultimately determines their actions.

      Here is what I would change:-
      • Reduce the amount of text in the banner.
      • I love the little skull guy but it really is unrelated. Get rid of him.
      • Place a screenshot of earnings up into view. Likely on the right side of the banner, in a box. Straight away this says "We make money here!"
      • Sum up in 10 or so words what you're offering.
      • Add a call to action bubble over the top of the earnings screenshot, or to the left underneath where the new 10 word summary would be saying "Join now for FREE!" or similar.
      • Move the "Is Freebies4Real right for you?" content box to the left, and move the four points to the right. That just makes more sense to me.
      And that's just the home page.

      Overall, some of the images used on the rest of the pages don't really go with the feel of the site. Specifically on the Join Us page, the 'The search for earning income..' graphic looks kind of cheap and doesn't match the rest of the 'web 2.0' vibe that I'm getting from the website. Also, the text graphic with the arrows and the blue testimonials graphic look pixelly and really should be anti-aliased.

      The layout on the Testimonials page looks good. I'd just lose the 'Yay!' and make the images open up using a lightbox effect when clicked on.

      And for the Contact Us page, I would align the form to the left and add in a sidebar much like the Testimonials page.

      But.. All of the above is just me.

      And I'm OCD when it comes to web design.

      :p
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4533008].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author Deadly Designs
    thanks, will do some edits
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4559649].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author Deadly Designs
    thanks, will do some edits
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4559650].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author drastic
    graphics remind me of things that target 12 year olds.

    is there really a reason to put a grunge emphasis on buttons? and wtf is that creepy looking cartoon creature?
    Signature
    CLERQS - buy ads, sell ads, trade traffic, and affiliate program.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4562640].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author markpscientist
    Originally Posted by Deadly Designs View Post

    Does this website look interesting to you?

    Freebies4Real.com - Improve Your Monthly Income From Home!

    Does it peak your interest? If not then why? It peaks my interest but does it peak yours? :rolleyes:
    Kinda, but there's still something missing in this site, I don't know exactly but when I visit it, it's okay, but there's still missing something... I'll message again, if I found out. Sorry.
    _____
    Mark - Professional Web Design
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4572233].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author showmack
    Website looks fine, however the graphics on big banner is not at all good. Its my personal views
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4572636].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author seowiz1
      Great work. Looks interesting but the loading time is slow.
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4587443].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author marksmit
    Some improvement needed about looking of this website. Left side and right side is totally blank. If you can add your contact details like phone number or Mail ID in top part of your website then it's good.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4587520].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author Renavon
    Its a bit cluttered straight away, you've tried to cram way to much into one page. Spread it out a little bit, all you have to do with a front page is get people going around your site. You don't need to overload then with information

    Also, when hovering over the slider it comes up with 'Prev' and 'Next' but nothing happens when you click them.

    And whats with the little figure on the left hand side of the slider, just creeps me out a little...
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4587601].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author logowarriors
    Its look good, neat and clean. Very Professional structure.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4706766].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author blou43RE
    Banned
    [DELETED]
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4721145].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author iqbal
    nice layout and design
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4721247].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author rozarfrazer
    Its a well designed website. but its a not useful to me.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4722050].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author davidjones25
    The banners don't look good. They look like scams to me. Maybe you should make the white borders rounded and 3D-like, and don't use cartoons unless it matches your site.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[4742021].message }}

Trending Topics