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feedback on website

by Leo M
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I started a new blog for iPhone 5 Accessories and I'd like to get your feedback on it

iPhone 5 Accessories - Great Deals!

I want to rank on the first page for that keyword but looks like I got into the game too late, as the iPhone 5 could be announced anytime soon.

Thanks!
#feedback #website
  • Profile picture of the author Mr Bill
    Looks like a fairly standard blog. Is it a fan site or do you intend to make money from it one day? Which design element did you customise that you want feedback on? The background is a bit cheesy for my liking. When you say you're a bit too early for the iPhone 5 what do you mean? I would have thought being early would be a good thing so you can place on rank early and get the jump on others. A bit late to get the "jump" on others but if you can place you should start to come on strong to ride the iPhone5 wave soon.
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  • Profile picture of the author Leo M
    Thanks for the feedback WSOHelp, I intend to flip the site. Opps I meant too late, should of started this blog months ago but only started a few days ago.

    What do you mean by the background? too generic?
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  • Profile picture of the author Mr Bill
    It looks like a Vista wallpaper. I'd go with something more modern/hip.
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  • Profile picture of the author Leo M
    I see, ok I'll try to create a more modern background. thanks for the feedback
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  • Profile picture of the author PatrickP
    There are some who think an almost brown bag plain site does better for getting people to click through which is the desired end result. As opposed to a very busy, hip sort of site which distracts the reader from what you want them to do.
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    • Profile picture of the author maxmalini
      Hey Leo,

      Awesome site! I really like the Mac OS/Apple theme you have going on the site! One quick thing though, you need more content. Otherwise the site is great!
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  • Profile picture of the author NovaAffiliate
    Very impressive; accessible layout, easy on the eyes, and it gives the impression of uniqueness and creativity.
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  • Profile picture of the author logowarriors
    Very neat and clean. Quite impressive color theme. Good work go ahead.
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  • Profile picture of the author deelow
    Site looks great for the niche for sure, like how u have even got in the white 1px shadow on the font that is present on all os x / ios x UI's

    just a little more quality content will give it that much need boost
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  • Profile picture of the author deelow
    Site looks great for the niche for sure, like how u have even got in the white 1px shadow on the font that is present on all os x / ios x UI's

    just a little more quality content will give it that much need boost
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    Freelance web and app designer
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    • Profile picture of the author juicebrenner
      Looks pretty cool. It's never too late to get traffic to your website for sales. Especially,that you have products that will be for a new version of the iPhone which has great demand.
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  • Profile picture of the author PeachCoding
    Very nice template with a very good iphone feel to it. I like the simplicity of the navigation menu. The site also loads and moves thru the pages fast which is always a plus in my book.

    Hope that helps.
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  • Profile picture of the author Leo M
    Thanks for the feedback guys, yeah I really need to work on the content which i hate doing haha
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  • Profile picture of the author robinsden
    I think is very nicely done. Very nice background. Text could be a bit bigger and I think you should make it black. That's it.
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