Please some feedback

by Jurrie

Posted: 14 years ago 4 replies

hello,

i've been experimenting with creating sales pages
and would like some honest feedback on it

click here for my design

thanks

Jurrie

nethead01 14 years ago

I think you should try a different approach, maybe do some research on other good sales page try to learn from them.

Originally Posted by Jurrie

hello,

i've been experimenting with creating sales pages
and would like some honest feedback on it

click here for my design

thanks

Jurrie
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shantanu 14 years ago

It is quite good and bright but u must use blue colour instead of red in the front with light blue not blood red it makes a cool impression and gives a positive sign.
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JDBradley 14 years ago

I agree, get rid of the red for the headline. its scary.
Blue is well known to be an indicator of trust.
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Jurrie 14 years ago

ok, I changed the colors

regarding the different approach, could you point me to a example if possible
would be much appreciated

Jurrie
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