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Please review my website

by tahoecale
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hello fellow warriors i need some help with my new project, i just launched it today and before i stat a ppc campaign i would like for some input on the overall look and layout of the site. Please let me know if you see any changes i should make.. and i know my logo doesn't make a ton of sense but im still working on that..

link to site: Centworkers, Get paid to do micro jobs

Thanks for your time
#review #website
  • Profile picture of the author Invert Planet
    It is cute. The logo in the top left seems a little "squished".
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  • Profile picture of the author stevenalowe
    I second the squished logo. Left-justify the bullet text instead of centered. USA should be all capital letters. Drop the "we" from "We turn your free time into money". "Employer's" should be "employers" [plural, not possessive]. While you're at it, reword the entire first paragraph, it's awkward English and redundant with the bullet lists. Might even want to drop it, since it doesn't say anything that your bullets don't already say. Add a call to action on the right-hand side instead of the laptop-and-money graphic.

    The About page is trying to be cagey about the site it's talking about, which is silly since the reader is already on the site; this reads more like a teaser from another site rather than an About page. An About page should be about the visitor, specifically the benefits to the visitor of using the site.

    On the How it Works graphic, "Join Free" would read better than "Free Join".
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    • Profile picture of the author tahoecale
      Originally Posted by stevenalowe View Post

      I second the squished logo. Left-justify the bullet text instead of centered. USA should be all capital letters. Drop the "we" from "We turn your free time into money". "Employer's" should be "employers" [plural, not possessive]. While you're at it, reword the entire first paragraph, it's awkward English and redundant with the bullet lists. Might even want to drop it, since it doesn't say anything that your bullets don't already say. Add a call to action on the right-hand side instead of the laptop-and-money graphic.

      The About page is trying to be cagey about the site it's talking about, which is silly since the reader is already on the site; this reads more like a teaser from another site rather than an About page. An About page should be about the visitor, specifically the benefits to the visitor of using the site.

      On the How it Works graphic, "Join Free" would read better than "Free Join".


      Ok i changed the logo, re-worded the intro... and took out the "laptop-and-money graphic"
      and fixed the "Free join" to "join free"

      Thanks for all the tips!
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