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Please Review My New WP Theme

by jumpa
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Hi Fellow Warrior,

I am still learning how to make wordpress theme and i am try to practice what i am learning.

I would like to get some feedback from you, here is the link:

Theme 1.1

Any feedback is greatly appreciated. Million Thanks!

(PS: This new site is an example i make to use my wp theme, the content is only example articles. thanks to ThinkDesignBlog.com for the free content. And what i am asking is the design, many great thanks)
#review #site
  • Profile picture of the author cassiegetty
    Wow! very well designed. Is this appropriate for business website?
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    • Profile picture of the author jumpa
      Originally Posted by cassiegetty View Post

      Wow! very well designed. Is this appropriate for business website?

      Thanks a lot, cassiegetty.
      Yes i hope. I design this theme for marketer and for business . but it still need more finishing.

      May be you can give some suggestion for this theme to be well enough for marketing and business.
      Thanks for your appreciation
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  • Profile picture of the author webpeon
    looks good... great start

    my only suggestion would be to keep it uniformed across the entire site, at the moment your home page and the other pages can appear to be 2 different sites, ie the home page is colorful (possibly too colorful) and incorporates a bunch of images etc and the rest are very plain.

    and tidy up the spacings between blocks
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  • Profile picture of the author Pamellalovely
    Nice and very amazing Theme you have make "jumpa"...
    Awesome...
    I like this...
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    • Profile picture of the author jumpa
      Originally Posted by webpeon View Post

      looks good... great start

      my only suggestion would be to keep it uniformed across the entire site, at the moment your home page and the other pages can appear to be 2 different sites, ie the home page is colorful (possibly too colorful) and incorporates a bunch of images etc and the rest are very plain.

      and tidy up the spacings between blocks
      Thank's alot , webpeon, i really appreciate your feedback.



      Originally Posted by maz07 View Post

      Hello Jumpa, your themes looks very simple and i think it needs some more improvements. How about using a Wordpress themes that you like as an example or guide? I think that will help you a lot. BTW, i think that your video's is awkward to be beside the form. Maybe you can move the form to the sidebar. There is two sub-tabs on your template? It's proper to have only 1. It is too colorful too but i like the slider on it. Hope this helps.
      Hi, Maz07, really appreciate for your suggestion. I would try to modify and hope you will give suggestion for that later. Gazilion thanks.


      Originally Posted by Pamellalovely View Post

      Nice and very amazing Theme you have make "jumpa"...
      Awesome...
      I like this...
      Hello, Pamellalovely, thanks a lot for your feedback. thank you


      Thanks for all you guys
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  • Profile picture of the author joekyut
    The theme is great and would certainly work well for a new site. Great work
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  • Profile picture of the author logoonlinepros1
    I think header on this theme is too large try to reduce size.
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  • Profile picture of the author graphic1970a
    I am very sorry friend but has very low standards
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  • Profile picture of the author incomemonthly
    All in all pretty good!

    Some ideas would be making the header optional, so it just has the video / form box at the top. I'd also suggest adding optional fields to the form such as phone.
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  • Profile picture of the author SimalamMedia
    Jumpa, I've reviewed your theme and here are some of my thoughts:

    - the graphics look a touch dated, however depending on your use, that's not necessarily a "deal killler"
    - it's fairly cluttered at some points, perhaps some whitespace to even out the flow of information
    - the information hierarchy (headings vs. content vs. sub-headings vs. links, etc) is a little unclear to me - judge what information is the most important to your readers/end user and colour/size/font accordingly

    I've been designing for quite a few years and here's a quick resource from wikipedia that I still find helpful:

    look up "principles of art" --- sorry, I'd post the link, but I'm new

    I wouldn't dare say that art and design are the same thing, but the principles are very useful.

    Also, check out conceptfeedback.com. It's a community of designers dedicated to trial by fire (aka design reviews).

    Good start! Best of luck!
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  • Profile picture of the author abramabrar
    Except some validation errors rest is good.
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  • Profile picture of the author chintangurjar
    Good Design Need little improvement. Make your custom design rather to picking up the images from the net....

    use photoshop ...for making custom designs.
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  • Profile picture of the author revolutionweb
    very nice and clean design.
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  • Profile picture of the author Fernando Veloso
    Stop for a minute and read everything you can get about Typography. Then do the same for User Interface. That should help you clean up some ideas and small mistakes.

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  • Profile picture of the author stephngreek
    Hi dude if you really developer of this theme then your starting is too good.
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  • Profile picture of the author jumpa
    I want to say : thank you , thank you, and million thank you to all of you , Warriors.

    All of your advice , feedback and suggestion are very usefull for me.
    I really appreciate all of your feedback

    Best Regards,
    Jumpa
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