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Take a look please

by NewbieAff
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Can someone review my website please, How To Make A Boy Like You| how to get a guy to like you Thanks.
  • Profile picture of the author ashishthakkar
    Did you just change the theme like right now ?!

    I saw the homepage and it was different color and now its different.

    Anyways i always prefer the clean and simpler look.

    Cheers.
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    • Profile picture of the author NewbieAff
      Yes Messing Around, Dont know whats best to convert
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  • Profile picture of the author Oliver Williams
    I would suggest that you match the background colour with the background of your affiliate site that you are promoting. Also just a small thing but the first line of your text says:

    "Welcome to this page which reviews the little know secret guide of discovering how to make a boy like you."

    Fix the grammatical error and remove the extra space in between reviews and the

    You could also add an About page and I would put some space between your main headline and your sub headline as it looks a little bit tight.

    Hope this helps
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    • Profile picture of the author NewbieAff
      I think So, Take a look, is this any better? Thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author WriterWahm
    I like it. It's clean and pleasant to look at. A few suggestions:

    1. Have an About Page
    2. Have an opt-in form (you need to start building your list)
    3. There's too much on the homepage, maybe you can limit it to 3 posts? Or use a static page if that works better.

    Don't forget that the key is to keep testing. Try different things and see which works best.
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  • Profile picture of the author mmrumii
    I saw it dude, you have already done better. But i think you should change the Header font color. go on.
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  • Profile picture of the author faysal969
    You should use a logo. Logo tells a lot to the visitor about the site.
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  • Profile picture of the author Wilcox
    I would suggest giving the site a little more of an eye popping section.

    A part of the page that grabs the attention of your viewers. A nice big vibrant image to capture your audience, and show them you have what they want.

    Move your adsense ads around and toy with what works best for you.
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  • Profile picture of the author webinventaekhlas
    I think you should change the theme. It's old.
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  • Profile picture of the author AJ Hypnotherapy
    I think your photo at the top looks a bit stretched and out of proportion. You should edit it in to the correct size and not just stretch it.
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  • Profile picture of the author mikedex
    Simple design and need to work more on banner. Update your site regular basis.
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    • Profile picture of the author sadeeshbala
      Hi,

      It was age old wordpress theme which makes it look so simple. Make attractive design, use romantic color.

      The content was good and i like the banners...
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  • Profile picture of the author DanielDuffo
    I like it.
    Very nice site. Nothing more, just the right.
    But yes)) make some grammatical corrections.
    ANd yes it looks like a business website.
    So, yes, i agree with Warrior Machine.))
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    • Profile picture of the author Internetoholic
      Think about changing theme. Almost always I am leaving blogs with default Wordpress theme. It means to me, that if someone don't care about blog design, he probably won't interest me with content. This is true in 90% cases ;-)
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  • Profile picture of the author BlackWar
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    Overall its very simple and fresh, you can use different theme or colors to attract visitors, oh need some grammatical corrections also.
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