Please review my website

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i have started a new website floating candles bulk

floatingcandlesbulk.com

please review my site and articles in it. i am not a native english speaker or writer.
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  • Profile picture of the author shantanu
    Too simple to give review u musat prepare a good header and after that make your font bit dark and professional, seperate categories with SEO links. Prepare a good template too bro which makes a good impact on visitors.
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  • Profile picture of the author senkuma
    thanks for your suggestions shantanu. any ideas on articles over there..
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  • Profile picture of the author legendkeeper
    First of all do the following adjustments
    1- Use the Justification alignment. It looks better
    2- If you are writing that much then at least put 1 more picture related to article.
    The placement of ads are pretty great and will give your some clicks.
    do some SEO of the website and some backlinking and you are good to go.
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  • Profile picture of the author headerdesign
    Too simple. I would add some colors and maybe a top header.
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    • Profile picture of the author sadeeshbala
      Not so attractive. Add some eye catching images
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  • your using clickbumb i think so you can make it look a bit more pro so people hang in there just a little longer and then go to the ads this will avoid a big bounce rate
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  • Profile picture of the author mstealth
    not bad but it needs more improvement, try to add data grids and keep all data in symmetry.
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  • Profile picture of the author spaculus
    Originally Posted by senkuma View Post

    i have started a new website floating candles bulk

    floatingcandlesbulk.com

    please review my site and articles in it. i am not a native english speaker or writer.
    Very nice Theme and very nice color combination. It is looking nice due to Simple color combination.
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  • Profile picture of the author mmrumii
    In my opinion, your site is looking so simple and not much more attractive.
    But it's beautiful. I think you can make it more beautiful by changing you header fonts and size and you should add some beautiful picture on there.
    in your site, you articles are so nice. good job.
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  • Profile picture of the author getboris
    I hardly imagine guys interested in floating candles so I am assuming your site is for women. Women are very visual, thus I would suggest more appealing design. If you are a beginner designer, you may consider using pre-made templates.

    Also, style text elements if you want people to read it. I would also suggest rewriting your text.

    As an example here is the link to one of my clients website, This website is designed for women and brings lots of customers for my client, may be it will give you some ideas.

    BeautifulHairSanDiego - San Diego Hair Salon
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  • Profile picture of the author senkuma
    thanks everyone for your reviews. i will consider some points and try to do the changes. what do you guys think about my writing style? please review the content too, so that i can know how i am writing.
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  • Profile picture of the author antac
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    I have browse your website few minutes ago. It's Looking beautiful but you have to make it more.
    I have also seen your article and that was really really looking professional. you are rocking dude. good job and go on.
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  • Profile picture of the author Skatewear
    Really immaculate design, I really like this...
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  • Profile picture of the author antac
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    I have visited your site few minutes ago.
    It was beautiful but I think you can develop it more.
    Basically your article you have created there are really really beautiful and looks like professional. Great job.
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