My first site

Nifty62

14 years ago

*sniff* Do I smell bad? :-P

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vivadesign

14 years ago

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Originally Posted by Nifty62

Alrighty,

Here is my first affiliate site.

It's based around an online game that I play. The site itself is basically a review of the game that includes gameplay trailers and will soon have some screen shots.

Also, I am aware that there are grammar errors still present and that will be corrected shortly as well.

URL: Eve-Online Review

Please note that this URL is not what it will be when I launch it, I have just not yet figured out what to call it.

As for what I'm looking for as far as suggestions, just about anything. Things to bring in traffic, keyword advice, does the review "draw you" though some of you might not be gamers, suggestions on url names etc etc.

Anything that will help my site be more likely to succeed

Thank you guys and let me tell you that I already appreciate the support and welcome you guys have extended to me!

I look forward to hearing your suggestions!

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Nathan Joshua

14 years ago

The bad:
You'll need to improve the SEO if you want to rank for those keywords.
I saw a few spelling and grammar mistakes.
Your pictures page links to some hosting company :s
You have no description or keywords meta tags
You have no h1 or h2 tags
Images are missing alt attributes
You don't have a robots.txt
You don't have a XML sitemap

The good:
You have written fresh content for Google to pick up
It's fast at loading
You have a good title tag: (max is 70 chars)
For a first design it is good

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Nifty62

14 years ago

Originally Posted by Nathan Joshua

The bad:
You'll need to improve the SEO if you want to rank for those keywords.
I saw a few spelling and grammar mistakes.
Your pictures page links to some hosting company :s
You have no description or keywords meta tags
You have no h1 or h2 tags
Images are missing alt attributes
You don't have a robots.txt
You don't have a XML sitemap

The good:
You have written fresh content for Google to pick up
It's fast at loading
You have a good title tag: (max is 70 chars)
For a first design it is good

Thank you for the input!

I did know about the grammar mistakes and I am correcting them and I also knew about keyword meta tags but I'm not very knowledgeable about how to use keywords.

The pictures page probably leads there because I think I forgot to upload a picture.html lol.

I will be going through and adding alt text to all the pictures probably tonight.

I don't know what a robot.txt is or anything about an XML sitemap. Any clarification on this would be great! I'll Google it after dinner.

Thank you all for the info and please keep it coming!

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YemTv

14 years ago

good effort keep it up,and turn your site into some unique look to attract people.but anyway good luck

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joerudy1988

14 years ago

Good try.

You may need to spend some time on SEO though.

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katepeter

14 years ago

Nice work done by you your site layout is awesome . i think it will attract people and you will gain more and more traffics ..!!

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dagnyjbarber

14 years ago

if this is your first one. I must say mind blowing wok. keep it up.

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dagnyjbarber

14 years ago

if this is your first one, then i must say mind blowing. keep it up.

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PromoDirect

14 years ago

Add more pages to your website. Make it more attractive using CSS. Since it is a gaming website, try to make it more interactive and visually appealing.

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mikedex 14 years ago

Originally Posted by PromoDirect

Add more pages to your website. Make it more attractive using CSS. Since it is a gaming website, try to make it more interactive and visually appealing.

Yes. Good suggestion. Top part is missing something. You have to add more attractive images as this is related to game. Please make it more attractive.
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linkmonster

14 years ago

Site is Good . Nice theme Choosen !!

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WebdevelopmentGroup

14 years ago

Good Job, clean it up a bit.

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mbitsol

14 years ago

Good Job keep working hard your skills will improve in time.

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Nifty62

14 years ago

Thanks for all the support guys!

I have done a bunch of editing to the site and will be doing more tonight and tomorrow.

Please let me know what you think!

EDIT: I know about not having alt tags and that I still need meta tags for my keywords. Thats a work in progress atm.

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mmrumii

14 years ago

As a first time, It's not bad, It's a good one.
But I don't think that, It's perfect. You have to do hard word to improve.
Otherwise you have to try about your site SEO. I'm sure you are a hard worker so,
I believe you can do it.

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digitalreinforcement

14 years ago

well nice site that has a good theme for the game so fine tweak it and it's good to go

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Anita Shaw

14 years ago

The site is already using CSS. The link reference to its style sheet is right above the title tage. Maybe there are more CSS elements that can be used to make important parts stand out more, but he is using CSS.

The site is a review site. Not sure how one would make a review site interactive. It's not a game in and of itself. It's just reviewing the game; which review will hopefully spark the interest of readers and get them to click through to the game itself, and sign up for it.

If some more experienced person out there could give some good advice on how to make a review site interactive that would be helpful. New ones don't know all the ropes that's why they come to forums like this. To find out HOW to do it, not just WHAT to do. Often, they may know WHAT to do, HOW is the hang up for them.

I'm betting poor Nifty doesn't know what a robot.txt is. Why is it important? How do you write one? (Actually, I'd like to know that myself, because I don't have one on any of my sites. So, poor Me, too!)

The overall design of the site is in keeping with the game's. Perhaps some screen shots of the game would be appropriate to add as illustrations.

Nifty, when you go through your piece to fine tune it, adding the recommended headers, make them meaningful, because you want to take as many keywords from your headers as you can. They count most in searches. Eve Online should be one of those keywords. I'll take a closer look at your site a bit later and see if I can help you with that.

In the meantime, nice work for your first time. Jumping in there and getting your feet wet can be scary! It'll get better as you pick up more experience.

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antac

Banned 14 years ago

I can't open your site.
what is problem? please check your site.

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ivankristianto

14 years ago

It is very clean. it's all white

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PaulCook 14 years ago

Originally Posted by ivankristianto

It is very clean. it's all white

hehe. My thoughts exactly.
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gabaSupplement

14 years ago

Index of /

Maybe your site is down now

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benjigbird

14 years ago

Hi i wanted to have a look but the link you provided isn't working?

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colnovationtech

14 years ago

url is not working..

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samsharen

14 years ago

awesome website. I like it.

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techotalk

14 years ago

its good almost try to ad keyword ,title tag on your picture and dont use much H1 tags

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samsharen

14 years ago

try to integrate an auto responder to capture leads.

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hotlinks

14 years ago

Site is Good .
Nice theme Choosen !!

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neevedu

14 years ago

Excellent your site.

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eXthus

14 years ago

The link is dead

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System Wide Solutions

14 years ago

I only see

Index of /

Message in browser.

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abhinayaa

Banned 14 years ago

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jogalivi 14 years ago

Originally Posted by abhinayaa

I cant see your website...
it shows only index of/

same here :/
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powerofschool

14 years ago

As every one say .
We cant see your Site dude.
It was just showing index of /. that's it dude.
Kindly check with your hosting or any other issues in your website.

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jbb423

Banned 14 years ago

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JenniferDavis 14 years ago

Ohh!, What happen to the site. I can't open it.
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Peter Hansen

14 years ago

The link is indeed dead. I see "Index of/" and the color white all over. The site might be down for quite some time now.

Let me know if I can help you Warrior to Warrior.

Good luck
Peter