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Alrighty,

Here is my first affiliate site.

It's based around an online game that I play. The site itself is basically a review of the game that includes gameplay trailers and will soon have some screen shots.

Also, I am aware that there are grammar errors still present and that will be corrected shortly as well.

URL: Eve-Online Review

Please note that this URL is not what it will be when I launch it, I have just not yet figured out what to call it.

As for what I'm looking for as far as suggestions, just about anything. Things to bring in traffic, keyword advice, does the review "draw you" though some of you might not be gamers, suggestions on url names etc etc.

Anything that will help my site be more likely to succeed

Thank you guys and let me tell you that I already appreciate the support and welcome you guys have extended to me!

I look forward to hearing your suggestions!
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  • Profile picture of the author Nifty62
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    Originally Posted by Nifty62 View Post

    Alrighty,

    Here is my first affiliate site.

    It's based around an online game that I play. The site itself is basically a review of the game that includes gameplay trailers and will soon have some screen shots.

    Also, I am aware that there are grammar errors still present and that will be corrected shortly as well.

    URL: Eve-Online Review

    Please note that this URL is not what it will be when I launch it, I have just not yet figured out what to call it.

    As for what I'm looking for as far as suggestions, just about anything. Things to bring in traffic, keyword advice, does the review "draw you" though some of you might not be gamers, suggestions on url names etc etc.

    Anything that will help my site be more likely to succeed

    Thank you guys and let me tell you that I already appreciate the support and welcome you guys have extended to me!

    I look forward to hearing your suggestions!
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  • Profile picture of the author Nathan Joshua
    The bad:
    You'll need to improve the SEO if you want to rank for those keywords.
    I saw a few spelling and grammar mistakes.
    Your pictures page links to some hosting company :s
    You have no description or keywords meta tags
    You have no h1 or h2 tags
    Images are missing alt attributes
    You don't have a robots.txt
    You don't have a XML sitemap

    The good:
    You have written fresh content for Google to pick up
    It's fast at loading
    You have a good title tag: (max is 70 chars)
    For a first design it is good
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    • Profile picture of the author Nifty62
      Originally Posted by Nathan Joshua View Post

      The bad:
      You'll need to improve the SEO if you want to rank for those keywords.
      I saw a few spelling and grammar mistakes.
      Your pictures page links to some hosting company :s
      You have no description or keywords meta tags
      You have no h1 or h2 tags
      Images are missing alt attributes
      You don't have a robots.txt
      You don't have a XML sitemap

      The good:
      You have written fresh content for Google to pick up
      It's fast at loading
      You have a good title tag: (max is 70 chars)
      For a first design it is good
      Thank you for the input!

      I did know about the grammar mistakes and I am correcting them and I also knew about keyword meta tags but I'm not very knowledgeable about how to use keywords.

      The pictures page probably leads there because I think I forgot to upload a picture.html lol.

      I will be going through and adding alt text to all the pictures probably tonight.

      I don't know what a robot.txt is or anything about an XML sitemap. Any clarification on this would be great! I'll Google it after dinner.

      Thank you all for the info and please keep it coming!
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  • Profile picture of the author YemTv
    good effort keep it up,and turn your site into some unique look to attract people.but anyway good luck
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  • Profile picture of the author joerudy1988
    Good try.

    You may need to spend some time on SEO though.
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  • Profile picture of the author katepeter
    Nice work done by you your site layout is awesome . i think it will attract people and you will gain more and more traffics ..!!
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  • Profile picture of the author dagnyjbarber
    if this is your first one. I must say mind blowing wok. keep it up.
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  • Profile picture of the author dagnyjbarber
    if this is your first one, then i must say mind blowing. keep it up.
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  • Profile picture of the author PromoDirect
    Add more pages to your website. Make it more attractive using CSS. Since it is a gaming website, try to make it more interactive and visually appealing.
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    • Profile picture of the author mikedex
      Originally Posted by PromoDirect View Post

      Add more pages to your website. Make it more attractive using CSS. Since it is a gaming website, try to make it more interactive and visually appealing.
      Yes. Good suggestion. Top part is missing something. You have to add more attractive images as this is related to game. Please make it more attractive.
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  • Good Job, clean it up a bit.
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  • Profile picture of the author mbitsol
    Good Job keep working hard your skills will improve in time.
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  • Profile picture of the author Nifty62
    Thanks for all the support guys!

    I have done a bunch of editing to the site and will be doing more tonight and tomorrow.

    Please let me know what you think!

    EDIT: I know about not having alt tags and that I still need meta tags for my keywords. Thats a work in progress atm.
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  • Profile picture of the author mmrumii
    As a first time, It's not bad, It's a good one.
    But I don't think that, It's perfect. You have to do hard word to improve.
    Otherwise you have to try about your site SEO. I'm sure you are a hard worker so,
    I believe you can do it.
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  • well nice site that has a good theme for the game so fine tweak it and it's good to go
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  • Profile picture of the author Anita Shaw
    The site is already using CSS. The link reference to its style sheet is right above the title tage. Maybe there are more CSS elements that can be used to make important parts stand out more, but he is using CSS.

    The site is a review site. Not sure how one would make a review site interactive. It's not a game in and of itself. It's just reviewing the game; which review will hopefully spark the interest of readers and get them to click through to the game itself, and sign up for it.

    If some more experienced person out there could give some good advice on how to make a review site interactive that would be helpful. New ones don't know all the ropes that's why they come to forums like this. To find out HOW to do it, not just WHAT to do. Often, they may know WHAT to do, HOW is the hang up for them.

    I'm betting poor Nifty doesn't know what a robot.txt is. Why is it important? How do you write one? (Actually, I'd like to know that myself, because I don't have one on any of my sites. So, poor Me, too!)

    The overall design of the site is in keeping with the game's. Perhaps some screen shots of the game would be appropriate to add as illustrations.

    Nifty, when you go through your piece to fine tune it, adding the recommended headers, make them meaningful, because you want to take as many keywords from your headers as you can. They count most in searches. Eve Online should be one of those keywords. I'll take a closer look at your site a bit later and see if I can help you with that.

    In the meantime, nice work for your first time. Jumping in there and getting your feet wet can be scary! It'll get better as you pick up more experience.
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  • Profile picture of the author antac
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    I can't open your site.
    what is problem? please check your site.
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  • Profile picture of the author ivankristianto
    It is very clean. it's all white
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    • Profile picture of the author PaulCook
      Originally Posted by ivankristianto View Post

      It is very clean. it's all white
      hehe. My thoughts exactly.
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  • Profile picture of the author gabaSupplement
    Index of /

    Maybe your site is down now
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  • Profile picture of the author benjigbird
    Hi i wanted to have a look but the link you provided isn't working?
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    url is not working..
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  • Profile picture of the author samsharen
    awesome website. I like it.
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  • Profile picture of the author techotalk
    its good almost try to ad keyword ,title tag on your picture and dont use much H1 tags
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  • Profile picture of the author samsharen
    try to integrate an auto responder to capture leads.
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  • Profile picture of the author neevedu
    Excellent your site.
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  • Profile picture of the author eXthus
    The link is dead
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  • I only see

    Index of /

    Message in browser.
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    • Profile picture of the author jogalivi
      Originally Posted by abhinayaa View Post

      I cant see your website...
      it shows only index of/
      same here :/
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  • Profile picture of the author powerofschool
    As every one say .
    We cant see your Site dude.
    It was just showing index of /. that's it dude.
    Kindly check with your hosting or any other issues in your website.
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    • Profile picture of the author JenniferDavis
      Ohh!, What happen to the site. I can't open it.
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  • Profile picture of the author Peter Hansen
    The link is indeed dead. I see "Index of/" and the color white all over. The site might be down for quite some time now.

    Let me know if I can help you Warrior to Warrior.

    Good luck
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  • Profile picture of the author mikedex
    Site is not opening. May be there is some problem on your server.
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  • Profile picture of the author airwala
    hi i am lavanya . iam new to this forum.
    i am also intrest to design website .
    how can i start ?
    any ideas
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  • Profile picture of the author johndoejohndoe
    Amazing. Thanks for the share.
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  • Profile picture of the author morantis
    I know that you posted here a month ago, but just letting you know the index folder appears empty at this time.
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    Nice site! I like it

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    Yup link is dead. Too bad I use to play that game
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    Your link to the site isn't working.
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    Hello,
    Your link is not working. What happened?
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