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17 years ago

Hey Jman,

Welcome to the great Warrior Forums, first of all

Not bad for a first attempt, my first attempt wasn't any good as this.. well done.

If you used the animated version of the banner, it would be a little more eye catching. ( Btw, I designed those banners for moremoney365 guys )

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17 years ago

Originally Posted by d3sign3r

Hey Jman,

Welcome to the great Warrior Forums, first of all

Not bad for a first attempt, my first attempt wasn't any good as this.. well done.

If you used the animated version of the banner, it would be a little more eye catching. ( Btw, I designed those banners for moremoney365 guys )

All the best

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aLee

Your designs look great, think I will be chatting to you very soon, want something similar to the Acia Berry page for a different product, what would the cost of that be?

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jimisan 17 years ago

Jman,

For first timers that are seeking informations on how to make money online, they will be interested with your offers. But once they exposed to all these "Autopilot Money Making Programs, Force Matrix, etc....", it's no more attractive anymore.

This is my opinion.....most of us newbies won't make money from these programs.......only the program owners do.
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ThalesMM

17 years ago

That's great, my first website was totally ugly, by the time (i was 12y.o) I thought if I used cool fonts in my links, people would see that font too, but they end up seeing just huge and blue links.. haha good times. lol but yours is way better than my first one. Keep it up!

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Jmanwarrior747

17 years ago

Thank u, thalesmm and d3sign3r, for viewing my site, I appreciate your opinions,
that's cool you designed those banners, I would like to have them flashing but the website page service i'm using does not allow for html insertion, a little limited for 10 bucks a month, for now its ok. thanks again
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irving

17 years ago

Its really good especially the blue and green.. which are my favorite colors too.

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Mickm

17 years ago

I gotta say I'm impressed, you've clearly researched a fair bit and put in a lot of time to your design. You've got a natural talent there... hell man I know a couple 'pro' designers who can't build a site to that standard.

The banners by d3sign3r are wicked and gives it that wow factor, I'm impressed with your level of SEO on your first site, good stuff man.

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Jmanwarrior747

17 years ago

Wow thanks Mickm and irving, I've been tweeking it a little everyday, thanks 4 the compliments, now if I could get the boatloads of traffic and autoresponder for my 'hot money quotes' signups, then i can seriously rake in the dough. With my referrals to MOREMONEY365 COM /////// on my link tinyurl .com /realdeal11 or : moremoney365 . vp web . com
, thanks 4 browsing my pages it's very encouraging to me, I need to hang in there!
many many thanks again
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17 years ago

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Jmanwarrior747

17 years ago

Thank you Shahzarimin, i appreciate your input, I agree with your suggestion, a few other people said the same thing..So that is cool I will reorganize for easier reading, thanks again.
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Jmanwarrior747

17 years ago

sweet, thanks warriors, I think I need a whole new site, monetized, viral, simple,money . hmmmm
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jblack

17 years ago

Looks really good for your first try. Great job, I think you will do well in this industry. You must learn very quickly

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New Life 17 years ago

Really good ma man!!

my first one didnt even load up ha ha!!

have you tweaked the site allready regarding colors?
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fizik

17 years ago

Hey really cool design

Great work. All the best for your future.

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jumbopanda

17 years ago

Hey Jman,

For a first ever website, I must admit, its really good. I started making websites 11 years ago, and the first was a crazy mess. I'm happy to admit that I've gotten better over the years. The colors match well. You might want to try to add a way to sign up for quotes on the front page, without requiring the user to click a different link to sign up. The "Review 2" is not descriptive, so I don't know what to expect if I click that link. If you are trying to sell a product, you need to come across as very professional. Testimonials might be good. I like the idea of quotes.

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Jmanwarrior747

17 years ago

Wow again, thank you jumbopanda,fizik,Jblack and NewLife for looking at my website.
Still a whole world of things to learn about, glad I found the Warriors first!
I am planning to upgrade my account here real soon
I must underestimate myself, good job jwarrior747, pats himself on back.
Ok all that's great but i need to make this site work, i have a few ideas other than MM365. quikcash$1000 and PLR products. BTW the url has changed from: jessesplace.vpweb.com to moremoney365.vpweb.com
Catchy huh?
Thanks again warriors, I keep y'all updated with where i'm headin, i do love this, i think i was meant for the internets he he.

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thomashoi

17 years ago

Good effort. some comments: Your headline need to change to something more attention grabbing otherwise your visitors will leave in 10 seconds and will not bother what is in the rest of the page.

You can also give simple descriptions and review of each ebook.

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photoads

17 years ago

good start .. everyone starts somewhere

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lingerieexposure

17 years ago

Hi,

I like the colors and design, but would like to see the left margin text a little darker.

Also, I've been taught that you MUST have a keyword rich domain that identifies your product. If your website is new, you might want to think about a shorter domain with your main keywords moremoney365 and use domain forwarding to your affiliate site.

Something you might want to think about.

Jessica

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Jmanwarrior747

17 years ago

Thank you fellow warriors, thomashoi, bs5143, photoads, NPmaster, and lingerieexposure, I appreciate all suggestions, even if I don't fully YET understand them. I will, when my brain settles, thanks again warriors,
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dntech

17 years ago

Definitely a much better job than my first attempt 4+ years ago. It was in FrontPage and I had no idea what I was doing. Thankfully I have learnt much since then. I think if you maybe improved the header and made it a bit more visually appealing and attractive then you would be doing great. Colour scheme may also need some tweaking. Overall though you have done a great job IMO for a first website. I'm sure you'll only get better and better from here. Now that the website is done, you're faced with the real job now - optimistisation and promotion to get visitors!

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Jmanwarrior747

17 years ago

Thanks for your opinion dntech, appreciate it, will take under advisement your suggestions, thank you very much.
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Web Dummie 17 years ago

Doode!

Nice job mang!

And for your efforts you have won a free wordpress blog.

If you just started this, you will be an animal with wordpress sooooo....

If you so choose, your additional dominion will be virtualcashflow.net

Let me know if want it and I will get you the credentials once it's set up.
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reynald2790

17 years ago

Nice website. Only need to change a little about your background. It should be more catchy. Or the header itself should be more catchy.

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Brandon Cameron

17 years ago

looks nice and makes me wanna purchase that "Mastering Php" you sell

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sohan113 17 years ago

Good thought for your site.

Good !

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17 years ago

I just put up my first site. tell me what you think budget stretcher com. I'll don't mind critics. send me an e-mail gp_classics yahoo

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jamesmcdonald

17 years ago

Really good effort for your first attempt! Good job

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Jmanwarrior747

17 years ago

Thanks Warriors,WebDummie, Reynald2790,dave147,BrandonC, sohan113,gp classics and JamesMcd, hopefully I will only get better, with y'alls help,
you guys are awesome!
Jmanwarrior747
soon i'll be able to get into the forum. yee haw!
tonight, sleep.............

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regan

17 years ago

Really cool design .

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Shawn_S

17 years ago

Very good as for the first design. Way to go!

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17 years ago

Looks really good for your first try. Great job

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jinmin

17 years ago

Hi Jman,

Not bad at all. In fact my first website is worse than yours

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Jmanwarrior747

17 years ago

thanks warriors, together we can make this work, i just need one good product, that will sell it self and get traffic forever at one website!
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Jmn187 17 years ago

looks good for your first attempt. keep up the good work.
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kronklee

17 years ago

Nice job, hope it makes you a truckload!
You made me remember my first site, some sort of stars background with a stack of animated pics, no real content

Good ol' days.

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eric.watson

17 years ago

Well done. The menu font on the left needs to have more definition. There is also a big gap between the submit link and the end of the site.

First site down and lots more to go!

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Robert24

17 years ago

Well it's great for your first attempt, but c'mon guys are you all being serious?

IMO - "first attempt" aside, it looks crap.

I'm sorry I had to say it.

Here's four quick thing's I'd like to say:

1) The font is too small. You're a marketer, you want your message to be easily read, not squinted at.

2) Why centre the text under the header? It doesn't look right.

3) Use a different font, right now Times New Roman isn't helping with the sites readability.

4) What on earth is the sites purpose? If I don't know why I'm looking at a page within 5 seconds I'm gonna hit the back button.

Great for your first website, but crap if you're actually trying to earn a living with it.

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jimisan

17 years ago

Originally Posted by Robert24

Well it's great for your first attempt, but c'mon guys are you all being serious?

IMO - "first attempt" aside, it looks crap.

I'm sorry I had to say it.

Here's four quick thing's I'd like to say:

1) The font is too small. You're a marketer, you want your message to be easily read, not squinted at.

2) Why centre the text under the header? It doesn't look right.

3) Use a different font, right now Times New Roman isn't helping with the sites readability.

4) What on earth is the sites purpose? If I don't know why I'm looking at a page within 5 seconds I'm gonna hit the back button.

Great for your first website, but crap if you're actually trying to earn a living with it.

This is the kind of constructive comments I would appreciate. I need your reviews for my site which I personally created about 1.5 months ago. I will wait for my 15 posts requirement to ask for a review later.

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mixelplik 17 years ago

Are you still accepting reviews of the sites? I think everyone wanted to be supportive of your efforts. I've been designing websites for 10 years now and let me tell you dipping your toes in the 'net waters is tough. I agree that your sites are rough, but I think what you need to do is buy some books on basic web design or perhaps stick to templates for now until you get vetted into the game. Your skills are at a 1 in a 1-10 scale. You'll get better, but you can't get upset that everyone here is being supportive of your first fledgling steps as a designer.

If you'd like a real no-holds-barred critique of you sites PM me. I'm tough but fair, and I would like to see you succeed with these sites.

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17 years ago

good job, man

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17 years ago

For a first attempt, very good work! Keep practicing and like anything you will improve over time.

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Caroline Ssamula

17 years ago

Hi I wanted to see your first website

I Know where you are coming from, plz pm me your link.

I also just completed my very first Website ever! I took it live and google has started recognising it. It's like a dream and am all over the moon.

It feels so great. and well done.

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17 years ago

Well done for your 1st website. Lots of content!

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17 years ago

good job Jmanwarrior747!

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philsout

17 years ago

hey, not bad! you're totally impressive...
improved your skills and there's a lot to go!
great job... keep it up!

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17 years ago

Nice Job, how is it working out for you so far?

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17 years ago

Nice job. wow.

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Matthew T. Gammett 17 years ago

I just wanted to tell you that when I visited your site the first thing that my mind made me click on was that big more money 365 banner. The Yellow was so mellow. You know colors have a serious psychological affect. Keep up the good work man.
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Jmanwarrior747

17 years ago

Wow thanks warriors, a full range of opinions, much appreciated.
hey jimisan see if you like this new splash page i made today, i know the other website sucks,
Makemoneyonline1st.com "Make Money Online Right Now! The Internets #1 Premier Member Site!"
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legrandbagley

17 years ago

Unrealated to the site, but directly related to the site content, MM365:
Is there a More Money 365 Game plan?
I just signed on for lifetime membership with mm365. Upon logging in, I see:
-tons of offers to all sorts of semi-scammy sites, mlm, forced matrix, etc.
-a wide variety of marketing articles, videos, many of them incomplete or a reference to an upsell product.
-reference to hosting that isn't quite working yet.

The best value I can see are the downloads section, with some PLR and templates.

I love the concept and think it can be really stellar down the road, but from what I can see, and the number of views for each video, there's not a whole lot cooking on this site even though it's been underway for quite a while.

Am I missing something?

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seomark09

17 years ago

Did not look to hard, but one thing I notice is your text is going off the page, I am using Firefox and seeing that.

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in51der

17 years ago

For a first attempt you should be quite please with your efforts.

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jdunlap

17 years ago

That's a great first site! I'm still learning the ins and outs of page design myself and usually rely on WordPress themes to help me but this is good inspiration!