Can you Please review the Page

by ours
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Greetings,

I am not sure what happened to my last thread (where i asked for review of our this site's new design). I apologies if I am re-posting.

Please check this web page and please give your feedback:

2X CONVERSION

Thank you in advance.
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  • Profile picture of the author jutipum
    You site looks good both firefox and chrome
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  • Hello there!
    Your website looks neat! It is well organized and not eye straining. I like how you put the colors together. They compliment with each other. Though your web design is already good, maybe you can utilize some graphics? Just a few of them. Do not make it look crowded.
    Regards
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  • Profile picture of the author ours
    Thanks guys for your feedback. Waiting for more feedback's to come.
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  • Profile picture of the author 723Media
    Hey ours. I like the design. It's clean and well laid out. I see a few small things that I would suggest some improvements on.

    1. The logo is a little blurry. That should very crisp.

    2. I would take away the "Can't Wait?" at the top and leave it as "Call now and talk to a conversion strategist." I know you put it there to encourage them to just call but it actually plants a negative seed that you don't intend it to. The connotation becomes that they may have to wait if they go through the rest of the funnel. It can make them think they have to wait a long time for somebody to get back to them or they have to wait through a long process to get what they want.

    3. I would play with the colors of the "Attention" tab at the top. Since your design is blue, I would suggest a yellow tab instead of grey. Draw the eye to it quickly. Then change the color of the hand drawn arrow to the same yellow so there is more contrast and it is easier to see. Black on blue made it hard to see at first.

    4. I would suggest changing this copy "Book a FREE 30 Minute Strategy Session" to "Book a FREE 30 Minute Conversion Strategy Session". That makes it perfectly clear what they get in that 30 minutes.

    5. In your form, take out the 2 dropdown boxes. I know they provide more info but if a customer isn't sure how to answer the online turnover question, they may bounce instead. That's a question that could be asked during their strategy session.

    6. The main headline is a little technical in it's verbiage. It addresses a pain point, which is nice, but the wording has industry jargon in it "Additional Advertising Expenditure". Make it hit them where it hurts: "Increase Leads and Sales By As Much As 100% Without Spending More Money".

    7. Same with this line: "Watch this video to discover how Conversion Rate Optimization(CRO) can help grow your website profits." I would try something like this : "Watch this video to discover how Conversion Rate Optimization(CRO) can help increase your sales."

    8. Your highlighted text under "Don't just take our word for it" has some typos. The first word in each highlight is repeated.

    9. The divider above "We're a Performance based..." has a white background against grey. Save that divider as a transparent .png.

    10. The columns for "What we do" and "Performance Guarantee", the text shouldn't flow around the icons. Let the icons stand out as a visual cue a little more.

    There are a few other spelling and grammar issues in the design that should be proofed.

    I know that seems like a big list but they are all minor changes. I hope that helps.
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  • Profile picture of the author ours
    Hello 723Media again amazing review. I really love to know how you able to observe in such issues. Really great. Thank so much for your reviews. Grateful to you. Appreciate your help.
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    • Profile picture of the author SEO Diva
      Entrepreneurs is spelled wrong at the top of the page. Also the "Watch this video..." blurb drops below the blue band.
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  • Profile picture of the author SEO Diva
    PS That's in IE
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  • Profile picture of the author ours
    Thanks SEO Diva to point those areas. We will fix those and let you know. Thanks.
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  • Profile picture of the author bolista
    im on firefox looks great
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  • Profile picture of the author OmiTaylor
    Visually, I like it except the text is overlapping the video "Watch this video to discover how Conversion Rate
    Optimization(CRO) can help grow your website profits."
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    • Profile picture of the author ours
      Can you confirm which browser you are checking, is it possible to have a screenshot. Thanks so much for your feedback.

      Originally Posted by maybornstar View Post

      Visually, I like it except the text is overlapping the video "Watch this video to discover how Conversion Rate
      Optimization(CRO) can help grow your website profits."
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  • Profile picture of the author Rotwic
    Everything is just right there in front of your eyes. The color schemes are brilliant and the your content stands out and differentiates itself from the rest. Keep up the good work.
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  • Profile picture of the author mikeye
    Your site looks very nice and professional. I like the video with optin on the right.

    A few suggestions:

    1. Add more texts on the page title to describe what you do rather than just a name.
    2. Add meta description and keywords rather than "Content Goes Here".
    3. Remove the two questions in the optin form so the orange button and "Plus Bonus" on the first screen without scrolling down. It's more important to see these two items in the first sight than the questions.

    Hope these helps.
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  • Profile picture of the author Andycoper
    You site looks good both firefox.
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  • Profile picture of the author soniamit
    your website looks g8.
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  • Profile picture of the author martinbx
    It looks a little bit complicated to me. There is way too much text on the front page. I don't think people will read all the text there.
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  • Profile picture of the author JeremiahSay
    Looks great. However, when I tried to play the video, it pops out within an iframe. Perhaps it would be good if you could autoplay the video. I believe it's okay to autoplay, since your video is very visible (top of the page), people can just pause the video anytime they want without much distraction.

    It's a great video by the way, i believe you spend quite a bit creating it (time or money), why not make full use out of it?

    Just my opinion though, hope this help
    Jeremiah
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    • Profile picture of the author ours
      Originally Posted by mikeye View Post

      Your site looks very nice and professional. I like the video with optin on the right.

      A few suggestions:

      1. Add more texts on the page title to describe what you do rather than just a name.
      2. Add meta description and keywords rather than "Content Goes Here".
      3. Remove the two questions in the optin form so the orange button and "Plus Bonus" on the first screen without scrolling down. It's more important to see these two items in the first sight than the questions.

      Hope these helps.
      Thanks for your suggestion. This is in test server and we will insert the seo suggestion you provided. We will pass this to our SEO department.
      Related to 3rd point, let me convey to our decision maker. Great suggestion.


      Originally Posted by JeremiahSay View Post

      Looks great. However, when I tried to play the video, it pops out within an iframe. Perhaps it would be good if you could autoplay the video. I believe it's okay to autoplay, since your video is very visible (top of the page), people can just pause the video anytime they want without much distraction.

      It's a great video by the way, i believe you spend quite a bit creating it (time or money), why not make full use out of it?

      Just my opinion though, hope this help
      Jeremiah
      Jeremiah, appreciate your view about the video aspect and Autoplay. As per our past experience autoplay is not recommended, but i will definitely share these views. And yes, spend lots of resource to create such video. We are glad that you like it

      We are thanking everyone your views about our little creation. Thank so much. Really helpful.

      Thanks a lot.
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  • Profile picture of the author ours
    One request members, if you able to get a chance then please review this other PPC page we are creating.

    http://www.warriorforum.com/website-...lick-page.html

    Thanks again.
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  • Profile picture of the author James King
    Wow! That is a BIG and beautiful site. You made me want to totally redesign my own site...and that sucks.
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    • Profile picture of the author ours
      Originally Posted by James King View Post

      Wow! That is a BIG and beautiful site. You made me want to totally redesign my own site...and that sucks.
      Nothing to get disappointed - your site looks good, little finishing touch and call per action related areas placement will make it much better.. if you need any advice you can pm us as well. Love to assist. No worries.
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  • Profile picture of the author Huy Phan
    I like it. Like it a lot
    I wouldn't change anything on it, it's great as it is.
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  • Profile picture of the author ours
    Thanks so much for your kind words. Appreciate.
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  • Profile picture of the author salelink
    Good color combinations and good-design
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